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Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Chess Game!"
A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from lyenochka
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It's good that you know the Lord Jesus Christ. It is in His work of saving grace and power over the evil one that we can have victory. May the Lord protect you and give you peace and victory in Him.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thanks I will need it in the following chapters.
    Ricky
Comment from Bicpen
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Hey Doc as far as I can see this seems to be a duplicate which I never knew we were allowed to put out I could be wrong if my failing eyes are that bludgeoned from my attempting to evade medication again and being doped at hi doses ... if it is the same piece its the same and gets the good rating for creative flair and persistence with a twist of achievement and a high appraisal for endeavour however the spag issue still remains and without a little tweak and tender loving simple correction no five my friend until it gathers itself from the dust of the pixels to the new fangled retrieval of intelligence that is the word processor .

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    What's thanks very much pic wicked comes out!
    Sorry Bic and I realize that you're having a medicated moment and I have of course always have the Alzheimer's moment and forgot to finish the review!
    But anyhow, it's completed and makes a little more sense.
    And, I will be going with the next dose of "Ricky Versus Satan!"
    In a chess game and it actually will be held down below?
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Bicpen on 27-Feb-2020
    anytime my friend anytime ...