Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Love "My Collection of Love Poetry
7 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely romantic poem for the Love poem contest Trisha. When love is returned 'devotion will endure', in sickness and in health. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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A lovely romantic poem for the Love poem contest Trisha. When love is returned 'devotion will endure', in sickness and in health. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Cheers for your kind review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming love poem. When we love someone who can put a spring in our step. We want to spent each minute of the day with them every day of the week.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A very well-written rhyming love poem. When we love someone who can put a spring in our step. We want to spent each minute of the day with them every day of the week.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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I appreciate your positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent it has good rhythm and rhyme lifting and excelling the pieces delivery which enhances the word choice speaking in a clear and somewhat quiet tone but not in a rushed or hurried manner. It deliberates well and infuses the desire and sentiment into the narrative with a well aligned and satisfying composure which treats the narrative to a sweet refrain and entices the mind to delve into the piece. It has a smooth appreciation of the sentiment disclosed and is a charm and grace to which it calls its wisdom and settles on a high tower.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Excellent it has good rhythm and rhyme lifting and excelling the pieces delivery which enhances the word choice speaking in a clear and somewhat quiet tone but not in a rushed or hurried manner. It deliberates well and infuses the desire and sentiment into the narrative with a well aligned and satisfying composure which treats the narrative to a sweet refrain and entices the mind to delve into the piece. It has a smooth appreciation of the sentiment disclosed and is a charm and grace to which it calls its wisdom and settles on a high tower.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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One far off day ......the elusive 6 WILL come by the laws of attraction! Thanks, I?m glad you seemingly enjoyed it
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A romantic and affectionate write Trisha and I enjoyed your story about the intimacy between lovers here, such devotion is rare these days, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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A romantic and affectionate write Trisha and I enjoyed your story about the intimacy between lovers here, such devotion is rare these days, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Glad you enjoyed the read, thanks
Hugs Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Our intimacy is very deep
Its a truly good connection
Gazing in each other's eyes
Holds more than affection
My favorite lines.
Very well done and the descriptions are spot on
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Our intimacy is very deep
Its a truly good connection
Gazing in each other's eyes
Holds more than affection
My favorite lines.
Very well done and the descriptions are spot on
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thanks. for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest.
This well rhymed verse tells of true love and devotion.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Love Poem Poetry Contest.
This well rhymed verse tells of true love and devotion.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I thank you for your kind review. Have a great weekend
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kahpot
Hello Friend, the second line in the fourth stanza "noone" should this be (none) This is a beautiful love poem and tribute to someone, love the chosen artwork, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello Friend, the second line in the fourth stanza "noone" should this be (none) This is a beautiful love poem and tribute to someone, love the chosen artwork, an excellent read, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Kahpot, you saw my weakness of word use. It should be ?no one?, and I thank you for improving my poem, I appreciated your
Complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
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Yes that flows even better, best wishes****kahpot
