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The Corona saga

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Corona"
to keep my sanity in time of pandemic

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Comment from estory
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You captured the fears of the corona virus in this short little piece. Everybody panicking over coming across possibly infected people. I don't think people realize yet what an impact this is going to have. There will be a bad world wide recession over this; travel industry, car industry, electronics, technology, all are going to be affected, for how long, we don't know. There will be layoffs and the markets will tank for a time. Head for Antarctica! No cases there...yet. estory

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    You are right, but I love the penguins:) so I am staying in Ca-na-da:)
Comment from royowen
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Yes, I think you're right, but anybody could carrying it, it's pretty well all over the world, in fact it's possible it could be your next door neighbour, buy I don't think this is bad as som that's been. Well done Iza, good job, blessings, Roy
Typo : I know a am (paranoia) paranoid?

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much Mr. Roy
reply by royowen on 26-Feb-2020
    A pleasure
Comment from Janet Foor
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A very timely story that you have shared. Scary times we live in with this virus and then the paranoia that people feel.

Very nicely told.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Yes is scary and pretty much real
Comment from country ranch writer
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This was well presented and we are all on constant watch for the deadly corona virus.it seems they could have a way of stopping this in its tracts.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Yes is scary and pretty much real
reply by country ranch writer on 26-Feb-2020
    It is scary as heck!
Comment from Susan Morritt
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A good entry for this little flash fiction contest. You created a setting, with a first person protagonist, and added a conflict. Paranoia is an appropriate description as well. Nice job.
Susan

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Yes is scary and pretty much real
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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Interesting reflection on paranoia. You go on a trip to Cuba, continents removed from China. But I suspect anywhere we run into people from China (not Chinese descent), most of us have the same fear if we admit it.

Glad to have you back!

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Yes is scary and pretty much real
Comment from Teri7
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Iza, This is a very well written 100 Word Flash Fiction story you have penned. I think the Corona virus is on the top of the list of what people are thinking about these days. You used great words and perfect picture. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much, Teri
Comment from emmaysavage
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I hope you mean paranoid instead of paranoia. I liked the very contemporary subject matter. I'd like to see it expanded a little to cover some of the anxiety this subject evokes

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much, Emma
Comment from Diana L Crawford
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This is awesome! Around my office, they call it the beer virus! It is a scary thing though to know there is something that can do the harm this virus can. I hope that it will be confined soon :( xoxo

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 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
    Yup that is what I thought too:) They must have been drunk when they release it