The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Corona"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
29 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
How brave. They say no travel here. No socializing. I cannot stand this virus. I hope the doctors and scientists find a cure so life can get back to normal. Stay well, Iza. What does that Corona beer taste like being you went on vacation?
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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How brave. They say no travel here. No socializing. I cannot stand this virus. I hope the doctors and scientists find a cure so life can get back to normal. Stay well, Iza. What does that Corona beer taste like being you went on vacation?
Comment Written 26-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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The Corona beer tastes like a Heineken or Stella . The only difference is that is served with Lime which changes that initial taste.Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from RShipp
You do seem to be correct in your observations.
Plus, many people seem to be associating the Corona Beer with the Corona flu???
Best of luck with the '100 Word Flash Fiction' contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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You do seem to be correct in your observations.
Plus, many people seem to be associating the Corona Beer with the Corona flu???
Best of luck with the '100 Word Flash Fiction' contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review.
Comment from JudyE
You're certainly right about the paranoia. I guess it will get worse before it gets better.
Just one point:
The vacation was sweet but short, I am still in recovery mood. - period after 'short'
Maybe this has been judged but if not, good luck. It's a very worthy entry.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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You're certainly right about the paranoia. I guess it will get worse before it gets better.
Just one point:
The vacation was sweet but short, I am still in recovery mood. - period after 'short'
Maybe this has been judged but if not, good luck. It's a very worthy entry.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review. Unfortunately it was judged and got zero votes:(
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Oh dear! You're allowed to vote for your own work. My second-last entry only go one vote too - and that was mine!
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I hit 'enter' before I had really finished. I guess I just wanted to say don't worry too much about the contests. Sometimes the results are hard to fathom. :)
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, Corona a great Mexican wheat beer-better served with lime- not virus, now it is everybody scared of everybody, I just seen a news clip about a fight in a supermarket here in Australia over toilet paper, how can toilet paper help this problem? I would like to know, a wonderful short story, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Excellent, Corona a great Mexican wheat beer-better served with lime- not virus, now it is everybody scared of everybody, I just seen a news clip about a fight in a supermarket here in Australia over toilet paper, how can toilet paper help this problem? I would like to know, a wonderful short story, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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You are right people are reacting silly to pandemic and usually focus on food or ... toilet paper. In Romania people took all the food available in the stores... is so sad. In Canada all the hand hand sanitizers are gone, and the masks are overpriced and you can find them only in specialized medical stores.
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I am glad to read that you are keeping in touch with your homeland****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent flash fiction, Iza. That Corona beer looks quite appealing situation in the sand with a slice of lime.
Yes the scare is becoming quite overwhelming.
Great job with this and best of luck to you with the CC.
Gloria
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Excellent flash fiction, Iza. That Corona beer looks quite appealing situation in the sand with a slice of lime.
Yes the scare is becoming quite overwhelming.
Great job with this and best of luck to you with the CC.
Gloria
Comment Written 07-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review.
Comment from Sallyo
Oh dear... I thought of the sun's corona! Here's hoping people will soon be able to go on holiday without these doubts. Well and succinctly written. Holiday was fun.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Oh dear... I thought of the sun's corona! Here's hoping people will soon be able to go on holiday without these doubts. Well and succinctly written. Holiday was fun.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you:)
Comment from Ulla
Hi Iza, this is a great little flash story and I liked the humour about the beer and the virus. It's sad, though that people take it out on the Chinese.
In your notes: everybody is paranoia = paranoid
Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Hi Iza, this is a great little flash story and I liked the humour about the beer and the virus. It's sad, though that people take it out on the Chinese.
In your notes: everybody is paranoia = paranoid
Good luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Thank you and the mistake has been corrected
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Iza: great short story. I'm glad you are safe. Good awareness
of traveling and the corona virus. We must all be safe and careful.
The airports are packed. The lines are long through security. Now,
they have dogs to check for guns. Will they test us for this virus?
Keep safe and well, flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Iza: great short story. I'm glad you are safe. Good awareness
of traveling and the corona virus. We must all be safe and careful.
The airports are packed. The lines are long through security. Now,
they have dogs to check for guns. Will they test us for this virus?
Keep safe and well, flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Unfortunately they don't test you just ask you where have you been. I don't think this helps the case. They say that there is no way to know in advance if you are a carrier until is to late.. Thank you for your review and concern:) stay safe my friend
Comment from Susan Larson
You did an excellent job using dark humor with the corona beer and the disease and portraying how people have this knee jerk reaction to every thing the see on the news. Just change paranoia to paranoid and you have a winner.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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You did an excellent job using dark humor with the corona beer and the disease and portraying how people have this knee jerk reaction to every thing the see on the news. Just change paranoia to paranoid and you have a winner.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for stopping by and for your encouraging review.
Comment from Bichon
Good job at creating a realistic scene in a rather short format. It is very sad that people are behaving in this manner towards Asian people, I guess some people are just daft, haha.
Maybe change "paranoia" to paranoid, it would fit better.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Good job at creating a realistic scene in a rather short format. It is very sad that people are behaving in this manner towards Asian people, I guess some people are just daft, haha.
Maybe change "paranoia" to paranoid, it would fit better.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your suggestion in replacing the word and also for your great review.
