haiku -- sick of it
a haiku10 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
A Haiku Bill, really? What has the world come to? I really like it,and I am duly impressed. You know, I saw a video recently that said that since the earth is actually a living organism it is quite possible and envem likely tat when there is an earthquake or a volcano eruption, it is the earth trying to ease an irritation. Who can be more irritating than mankind? Think about it.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A Haiku Bill, really? What has the world come to? I really like it,and I am duly impressed. You know, I saw a video recently that said that since the earth is actually a living organism it is quite possible and envem likely tat when there is an earthquake or a volcano eruption, it is the earth trying to ease an irritation. Who can be more irritating than mankind? Think about it.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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No one comes to mind.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Very good Haiku! great two-fold idea going on! I love the picture too and the color scheme you used! awesome way to show the surprise ending with the volcano vomiting! haha! xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Very good Haiku! great two-fold idea going on! I love the picture too and the color scheme you used! awesome way to show the surprise ending with the volcano vomiting! haha! xoxo
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Diana
Comment from Auryn Eisley
I've said it before Bill but I really enjoy the comedic essence of your poetry. I loved that satirical ending 'Vulcan vomits' which is a nice juxtaposition to how the rest of your Haiku reads. Good job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I've said it before Bill but I really enjoy the comedic essence of your poetry. I loved that satirical ending 'Vulcan vomits' which is a nice juxtaposition to how the rest of your Haiku reads. Good job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Auryn, for the kind review. Bill
Comment from Mistydawn
There does seem to be corruption, destruction all around us. Making it sometimes seem the world is nothing but evil. Then someone does a kind deed, says a nice word and our hope in humanity is restored again. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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There does seem to be corruption, destruction all around us. Making it sometimes seem the world is nothing but evil. Then someone does a kind deed, says a nice word and our hope in humanity is restored again. Nicely done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thanks, MD
Comment from lyenochka
I'm sure I could find a seasonal reference in here. Do volcanoes erupt more in some seasons? I like your satori ending of Vulcan vomits. Yes, I guess our poor Earth is sick of us.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I'm sure I could find a seasonal reference in here. Do volcanoes erupt more in some seasons? I like your satori ending of Vulcan vomits. Yes, I guess our poor Earth is sick of us.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An apt description of this volcano and its activity that erupts without warning, I wish you luck with the contest as this is a very good entry Bill, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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An apt description of this volcano and its activity that erupts without warning, I wish you luck with the contest as this is a very good entry Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from kahpot
What an excellent poem and presentation, your words in this short read are powerful and I like the way you have used nauseated with vomits, the blended colors work wonderfully, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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What an excellent poem and presentation, your words in this short read are powerful and I like the way you have used nauseated with vomits, the blended colors work wonderfully, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
I thought you have a great Haiku Poetry Entry.
Your thoughts came together very well.
You executed the right amount of syllable usage in each line to qualify.
I wish you well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I thought you have a great Haiku Poetry Entry.
Your thoughts came together very well.
You executed the right amount of syllable usage in each line to qualify.
I wish you well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thanks, LMB
Comment from moongirlwriter
So graphic a feeling of Mother Nature and how she feels we have cared for this planet. Nice job on this writing and the artwork. . .it matches perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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So graphic a feeling of Mother Nature and how she feels we have cared for this planet. Nice job on this writing and the artwork. . .it matches perfectly. Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you, MGW
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Are we lost in the climate debate today....? This quite a thought-provoking offering that hearkens the reader back to the harshness of a mythological god while, at the same time, reminding them that we are but sojourners on this rock hurtling through the cosmos... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvete
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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LOL! Are we lost in the climate debate today....? This quite a thought-provoking offering that hearkens the reader back to the harshness of a mythological god while, at the same time, reminding them that we are but sojourners on this rock hurtling through the cosmos... :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvete
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Yvette
