The Symphony Of You
Rhyming poem contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a beautiful rhyming poem, and beautifully rhymed Wendy. You really blend the love for each other with the love of music.
She'll sing. The symphony of you - loved that line.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is a beautiful rhyming poem, and beautifully rhymed Wendy. You really blend the love for each other with the love of music.
She'll sing. The symphony of you - loved that line.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thanks so much for taking a look at my penny-pinchers post. I appreciate the kind words and the sixth that goes straight to the ego. - Wendy
Comment from BeasPeas
This is beautifully written, Wendy. Wording is very nice, illustration is appropriate and make a nice combination. I'm sorry for your friend's loss and I identify with it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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This is beautifully written, Wendy. Wording is very nice, illustration is appropriate and make a nice combination. I'm sorry for your friend's loss and I identify with it. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Thank you Marilyn, I appreciate the kind words and I too mourn the reason it was written. - Wendy
Comment from kiwisteveh
An intensely sad, yet sweet, piece.
The sixth star is for the masterly maintaining of the metaphor throughout without overdoing it, which would have risked becoming maudlin.
Meter and rhyme are spot on, as I would expect. This should have a good chance in the contest, especially since I have once again missed the deadline! Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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An intensely sad, yet sweet, piece.
The sixth star is for the masterly maintaining of the metaphor throughout without overdoing it, which would have risked becoming maudlin.
Meter and rhyme are spot on, as I would expect. This should have a good chance in the contest, especially since I have once again missed the deadline! Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you Steve. I appreciate your thoughts on the metaphor as I was trying to temper it yet remain consistent. Sorry you missed the deadline, sort of. - Wendy
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Awwww. This is wonderful! A perfect blend of grammar, mix, style and rhyme. I'm so in love with this. A great job you've done. Good-luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Awwww. This is wonderful! A perfect blend of grammar, mix, style and rhyme. I'm so in love with this. A great job you've done. Good-luck in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish. - Wendy
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest.
This is a sad story told in this lovely well-rhymed verse.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Rhyming Poetry contest.
This is a sad story told in this lovely well-rhymed verse.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Sharon, for taking the time to read my piece. - Wendy
