A Shadow On The Street
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "A Race To Save A Family"One man's blessing can be another's curse.
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Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is another very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. It kept me on pins and needles reading this. Very good job my friend. May God bless you! Teri
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Mike, This is another very well written chapter. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from your words. It kept me on pins and needles reading this. Very good job my friend. May God bless you! Teri
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi, Terri! A warning, the twist in the story is about to happen. Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Wow!! Simply wow!! Such a good read! Really unique in concept and even reading out of context this chapter was great by all standards! I am going to start following you now so I can read the previous chapters and the ones yet to come as well.
Your story checked every single box for me! Keep writing! :-)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Wow!! Simply wow!! Such a good read! Really unique in concept and even reading out of context this chapter was great by all standards! I am going to start following you now so I can read the previous chapters and the ones yet to come as well.
Your story checked every single box for me! Keep writing! :-)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hell, my friend! A warning, the twist in the story is about to happen. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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I have started following you so I?ll be sure to read what comes next in the story! :-)
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, my. Now Lew is wounded. He was so brave to jump in front of that bullet. He has saved the wife and son of the councilman Gray. That was his intent so mission accomplished.
I love your stories about Lew Bradley. He is my super Hero. Well done Mike. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Oh, my. Now Lew is wounded. He was so brave to jump in front of that bullet. He has saved the wife and son of the councilman Gray. That was his intent so mission accomplished.
I love your stories about Lew Bradley. He is my super Hero. Well done Mike. Nancy:)
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi, Nancy. I hate to tell you this, but the twist in the story is about to happen. Many thanks for your kind words and for those shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello PapaMike, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for another entertaining, exciting, and wonderful chapter of your book. I hope this character doesn't end with this book, you could turn it into a series. Good job and have a good day!
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello PapaMike, a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this finds you well, in good health and spirit. Thank you for another entertaining, exciting, and wonderful chapter of your book. I hope this character doesn't end with this book, you could turn it into a series. Good job and have a good day!
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello, my friend! Many thanks for your kind words.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
