Sentient savage
Carried with the hardships5 total reviews
Comment from KyColonel Randal
I find the combination of rhyming end words and lack of punctuation intriguing. In some places the rhyme scans more smoothly than others. The use of illustration and font manipulation would improve the presentation. Thank you for sharing.
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I find the combination of rhyming end words and lack of punctuation intriguing. In some places the rhyme scans more smoothly than others. The use of illustration and font manipulation would improve the presentation. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this well written poem that expresses well your idea of fighting for survival against all the odds in this cruel world. I like the phrasing that you feel like you've been skinned and are part of the history of the dodos.
Bill
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I like this well written poem that expresses well your idea of fighting for survival against all the odds in this cruel world. I like the phrasing that you feel like you've been skinned and are part of the history of the dodos.
Bill
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Sentient savage by astyanax
Hello, astyanax,
I really enjoyed your poem about resilience and never giving up. My motto is 'as long as there is life there is hope'. A very interesting poem. Well done.
gypsy
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Sentient savage by astyanax
Hello, astyanax,
I really enjoyed your poem about resilience and never giving up. My motto is 'as long as there is life there is hope'. A very interesting poem. Well done.
gypsy
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A really great poem. It reminds me of the old poems of Jack Kerouac. It's very well written and brings to mind the travels of the mind as it moves through life.
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A really great poem. It reminds me of the old poems of Jack Kerouac. It's very well written and brings to mind the travels of the mind as it moves through life.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Life never ceases to amaze me and how we can cling onto it in the face of adversity, and as you say all species strive to survive, we all love life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Life never ceases to amaze me and how we can cling onto it in the face of adversity, and as you say all species strive to survive, we all love life, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
