Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Intimacy"My Collection of Love Poetry
9 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love the picture you've chosen to go with you 1-6-1 poem Trisha, it shows that oldies can still have fun, enjoy each other and life. Love your words, a great description of intimacy, well done.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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I love the picture you've chosen to go with you 1-6-1 poem Trisha, it shows that oldies can still have fun, enjoy each other and life. Love your words, a great description of intimacy, well done.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2020
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Your kind review was appreciated
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-word poem about the intimacy of two souls who blend perfectly in harmony with one another to share their common goals.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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A very well-written six-word poem about the intimacy of two souls who blend perfectly in harmony with one another to share their common goals.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thanks, I appreciate your kind review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from lance michaels
Nicely done! That picture reminds me of my grandparents (God rest their souls), who were married for fifty-five years before my grandfather passed away. Thank you for stirring those memories
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Nicely done! That picture reminds me of my grandparents (God rest their souls), who were married for fifty-five years before my grandfather passed away. Thank you for stirring those memories
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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You are welcome! It?s serendipitous as to readers? delight when reading,. I always love to hear my poetry affects people. Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Susan X Smith
The picture really made me smile. This is a great entry for this particular contest. The rhyme and syllable count are as ordered. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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The picture really made me smile. This is a great entry for this particular contest. The rhyme and syllable count are as ordered. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I felt it appropriate to include older couples for a change! Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, Trisha.
-A good topic, too.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration, as well as rhyme.
-A positive message, as well.
-Good luck with your entry!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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-Good image and
presentation, Trisha.
-A good topic, too.
-Effective imagery and
alliteration, as well as rhyme.
-A positive message, as well.
-Good luck with your entry!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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What a hoot. I was told by another reviewer there was only 5 words so in haste I added one. Now you noticed I have 7 so I?ve taken one off. I just can?t count!
Hugs, Trisha
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This is funny, Trisha. I don't think either one of you counted:) Back to the Count on "Sesame Street" for you! I changed your review for you, too:)
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
To bare one's soul and heart is the most frightening thing one can do. But sometimes the rewards make it worthwhile. To find that the best friend you feared losing with those words is your soulmate is one of those rewards.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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To bare one's soul and heart is the most frightening thing one can do. But sometimes the rewards make it worthwhile. To find that the best friend you feared losing with those words is your soulmate is one of those rewards.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I never had that experience, unfortunately. I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is nice, Trisha. You tell the story of the photo in six words. Those two souls are the lucky ones. They clearly are so in love. Their intimacy is in their touching knees and bare toes. And there is intimacy in their eyes.
This one made me feel good.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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This is nice, Trisha. You tell the story of the photo in six words. Those two souls are the lucky ones. They clearly are so in love. Their intimacy is in their touching knees and bare toes. And there is intimacy in their eyes.
This one made me feel good.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Elderly people need intimacy, when all ?other? is done. Today, it seems only sexual activity is classified as intimacy. It?s great to see older couples who have known different kinds of it. Thanks so much for reviewing,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Bicpen
It has a sensibility a movement and a voice of endearing sentiment it deliberates and passes the knowledge of its wisdom quite appropriately however it is good not excellent in my eyes a s I fear it is on a shore of uncertain concrete imagery and is washing in a pool of possible opaque nature due to the word choice. It has a flow and an adherence of consistency but is not strengthened by the word choice it is coherent but not forceful it is succinct but not enlightening enough it addresses the charm of the two becoming one but leaves a lingering doubt about its approach ability
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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It has a sensibility a movement and a voice of endearing sentiment it deliberates and passes the knowledge of its wisdom quite appropriately however it is good not excellent in my eyes a s I fear it is on a shore of uncertain concrete imagery and is washing in a pool of possible opaque nature due to the word choice. It has a flow and an adherence of consistency but is not strengthened by the word choice it is coherent but not forceful it is succinct but not enlightening enough it addresses the charm of the two becoming one but leaves a lingering doubt about its approach ability
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Well then Bic! Back to the drawing board for pictures. Thanks for your in depth review, appreciated!
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anytime ...
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
bared
blending of two souls
shared
Add another syllable to the second line, I read it as 5 not 6. LOved the rhyming words, so romantic. Good luck
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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bared
blending of two souls
shared
Add another syllable to the second line, I read it as 5 not 6. LOved the rhyming words, so romantic. Good luck
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thanks for watching my 6 word back,. I obviously can?t do simple addition LOL
Hugs, Trisha
