Sock Dream
a poem14 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Bill,
Fun-filled poem. Lots of s- and p- letter alliterations walking about. Your last line is a great twist on the verse.
Good choice of artwork for your post.
Mark
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Bill,
Fun-filled poem. Lots of s- and p- letter alliterations walking about. Your last line is a great twist on the verse.
Good choice of artwork for your post.
Mark
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Mark
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
There is one thing for certain... there are a couple of writers here - of whom you are one -- I just have to hold my breath when I read their posts.
I never, NEVER know what to expect. Except that it will be unusual, creative and entertaining. This one, as an example. ha
Thank you!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Bill,
There is one thing for certain... there are a couple of writers here - of whom you are one -- I just have to hold my breath when I read their posts.
I never, NEVER know what to expect. Except that it will be unusual, creative and entertaining. This one, as an example. ha
Thank you!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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You are very kind to say that, Robyn. Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this poem, Bill! It's whimsical and "punny" as well as poignant. Society often feels "soleless" and how many pedestrians feel the lack of protection. Well done!
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Loved this poem, Bill! It's whimsical and "punny" as well as poignant. Society often feels "soleless" and how many pedestrians feel the lack of protection. Well done!
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you, lyenochka. I cried for I had no shoes...
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, I really like how this short poem plays with the words. It's one big pun and I suppose everyone of them(the puns) were intended. I liked your poem very much. All best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hi Bill, I really like how this short poem plays with the words. It's one big pun and I suppose everyone of them(the puns) were intended. I liked your poem very much. All best. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Some people thought it socked. Not really.
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he he, again you're playing with the word.
