First Love Cuts the Deepest
summer haiku27 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
Did Sheryl Crow sing "The first cut is the deepest"? Just a reef that leaves wounds that never heal, so too do you keep the scars. They may no longer hurt as much as, but they remain.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Did Sheryl Crow sing "The first cut is the deepest"? Just a reef that leaves wounds that never heal, so too do you keep the scars. They may no longer hurt as much as, but they remain.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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No, it's a cat Stevens's song.
Thank you very much for the review.
Comment from Lu Saluna
Hi Gypsy,
Those coral reefs are sharp like little razors. Yes first love gone wrong or just ending does cut the deepest. Seems to be the one we rember the longest as well even if it was really bad. Sounds like yours was really nice.
Great haiku for a first love.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi Gypsy,
Those coral reefs are sharp like little razors. Yes first love gone wrong or just ending does cut the deepest. Seems to be the one we rember the longest as well even if it was really bad. Sounds like yours was really nice.
Great haiku for a first love.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, honey,
love & peace to you
gypsy
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I* like the words to your poem and the photo.
They brought back memories of sixty years ago that when I met my first love , my first everything and the first to break my heart.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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I* like the words to your poem and the photo.
They brought back memories of sixty years ago that when I met my first love , my first everything and the first to break my heart.
Thank you for sharing
cookie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
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Your very welcome.
take care
Cookie
Comment from June Sargent
Ah, sweet memories of first love. This well crafted haiku captures the agony and the ecstasy of that first connection. And it usually is a deep one. I enjoyed your trip into the past.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Ah, sweet memories of first love. This well crafted haiku captures the agony and the ecstasy of that first connection. And it usually is a deep one. I enjoyed your trip into the past.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from LisaMay
I see you are adept at short form poetry (congratulations on winning with your Joker review). In this haiku you have painted the scene well in depicting your time at the seaside and the concept of first love cuts deepest linked to the sharp reef.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I see you are adept at short form poetry (congratulations on winning with your Joker review). In this haiku you have painted the scene well in depicting your time at the seaside and the concept of first love cuts deepest linked to the sharp reef.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I can identify with the write because I will never forget my first love, he broke my heart and taught me to be a little tougher when it came to love, I owe him, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I can identify with the write because I will never forget my first love, he broke my heart and taught me to be a little tougher when it came to love, I owe him, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much for the review 😊
Comment from Ronni
Hi Gypsy,
Very sensual summary and memoir of your first love. Ever so true,
it is that very first awareness and electrifying feeling of a sudden
or gradually evolving first love. Virtually unforgettable, and
irreplaceable; no matter how many or kind of loves thereafter.
My first love...similar to this story....except for different time
and place and name. There were no other comparable 'Leland's'
in my first love story. Thus yours here, had an instant draw
and recall for me! Thanks for sharing dear!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hi Gypsy,
Very sensual summary and memoir of your first love. Ever so true,
it is that very first awareness and electrifying feeling of a sudden
or gradually evolving first love. Virtually unforgettable, and
irreplaceable; no matter how many or kind of loves thereafter.
My first love...similar to this story....except for different time
and place and name. There were no other comparable 'Leland's'
in my first love story. Thus yours here, had an instant draw
and recall for me! Thanks for sharing dear!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hello, Ronnie, thank you for the outstanding review and six stars. I appreciate your kind words and feed back.
Gypsy 😊 ps I really like your profile pic
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This can take many people back memory lane. First loves are not forgotten easily. Sometimes they are lessons learned and we become wiser from experiencing them.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This can take many people back memory lane. First loves are not forgotten easily. Sometimes they are lessons learned and we become wiser from experiencing them.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
I especially liked the resonating final line of your haiku that echoes the sharpness of the reef. Thank you for sharing the additional context in your notes and adding the reinforcing photo. Sighs- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I especially liked the resonating final line of your haiku that echoes the sharpness of the reef. Thank you for sharing the additional context in your notes and adding the reinforcing photo. Sighs- Joan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much 😊
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Vivid, apt imagery. I like the summer sharp coupled with cuts. Good for you to give credit to Cat for borrowing his lyric--on which you certainly put your own clever twist. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Vivid, apt imagery. I like the summer sharp coupled with cuts. Good for you to give credit to Cat for borrowing his lyric--on which you certainly put your own clever twist. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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thank you very much, Liz :)
