A Quiet Place
Free Verse Using words with A29 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
As read your poem, I thought it must have been fun writing it and properly placing all those 'A' words in meaningful context. I enjoyed it very much, as I do all your poetry. Your poetic ABILITY is AMAZING and APPRECIATED.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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As read your poem, I thought it must have been fun writing it and properly placing all those 'A' words in meaningful context. I enjoyed it very much, as I do all your poetry. Your poetic ABILITY is AMAZING and APPRECIATED.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Susan I am profoundly grateful for you positive validation with my poetic efforts.
Comment from Aussie
Your words are so very true. In simple words, "take the time to touch the morning." Life is too short to let mechanical living take over. Especially the computer and the cell phone! We miss so much with blinders on.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Your words are so very true. In simple words, "take the time to touch the morning." Life is too short to let mechanical living take over. Especially the computer and the cell phone! We miss so much with blinders on.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I am so grateful for your six-star validation!
Comment from lyenochka
Nicely done alliterative free verse with so many "a" words and it is also a philosophical one. I especially liked: "Take a break from the grist mill of life."
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Nicely done alliterative free verse with so many "a" words and it is also a philosophical one. I especially liked: "Take a break from the grist mill of life."
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to review and comment on this poem.
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Marvelous! So clever to combined all of your "a" words into a concluding verse! Well done! The wisdom implied through the poem is superb and all should heed the words! Great offering for our free verse club! xoxo
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Marvelous! So clever to combined all of your "a" words into a concluding verse! Well done! The wisdom implied through the poem is superb and all should heed the words! Great offering for our free verse club! xoxo
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Diana, thank you I very much appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this verse is nicely done. You've made excellent work of your 5 'A' words.
You've met the Free Verse challenge very well.
The matching artwork is amazing.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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I think this verse is nicely done. You've made excellent work of your 5 'A' words.
You've met the Free Verse challenge very well.
The matching artwork is amazing.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Sharon, thank you. A fun challenge this week, for certain!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Good job!! I find anything that I have to work that hard at doesn't appeal to me in the least. LOL But you seem to do it just fine! Good job!! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Good job!! I find anything that I have to work that hard at doesn't appeal to me in the least. LOL But you seem to do it just fine! Good job!! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Patty, the words come from I no not where, most often, they become my favorite poems.
Comment from Sally Law
One of my favorite things to do is put,ah pretend with my granddaughter. It seems to shake the angst out of me and slap some artistic expression into me.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the challenge.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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One of my favorite things to do is put,ah pretend with my granddaughter. It seems to shake the angst out of me and slap some artistic expression into me.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best for the challenge.
Sal :))
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Sally, thank you! Enjoy a week long life adventure!
Comment from June Sargent
Very well done! Not only did you meet the challenge by fulfilling the requirements, but the poem made sense and offered great advice. I really enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Very well done! Not only did you meet the challenge by fulfilling the requirements, but the poem made sense and offered great advice. I really enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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June, a double! I am so pleased you connected with this.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To live in the moment certainly slows the clock down as we consider every detail and enjoy the peace and tranquility, and this is the only way to achieve fulfilment, food for thought here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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To live in the moment certainly slows the clock down as we consider every detail and enjoy the peace and tranquility, and this is the only way to achieve fulfilment, food for thought here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your review and comments>
Comment from Mastery
Good job on this one, Jim. As usual you are very original and profound in your works. I liked these lines in particular:
"Be aware of life's dares that can easily
destroy the possibilities to simply feel joy."
: ) Bob
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Good job on this one, Jim. As usual you are very original and profound in your works. I liked these lines in particular:
"Be aware of life's dares that can easily
destroy the possibilities to simply feel joy."
: ) Bob
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hi Bob! I am pleased this resonated with you! I trust that all is well in your world, Jim
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Hi Jim I have been sick with flu-like symptoms for about two weeks now. Just getting back in flow. :) Bob
