A Quiet Place
Free Verse Using words with A29 total reviews
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the start. I love the three important words that you used starting with the letter A
it will surely bring you peace.
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match. You captured my attention from the start. I love the three important words that you used starting with the letter A
it will surely bring you peace.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Cookie, I delight that you did enjoy this poem. Have a truly wonderful day!
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It was my pleasure Have a nice day.
cookie
Comment from LisaMay
Your word choices have led to a wonderful instructional poem on how to achieve inner peace in the present moment. I like how you have repeated your chosen words in the last stanza to achieve a succinct summary.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Your word choices have led to a wonderful instructional poem on how to achieve inner peace in the present moment. I like how you have repeated your chosen words in the last stanza to achieve a succinct summary.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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LisaMay, thank you for your review and validation on A Quiet Place.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific response to the Free Verse Club Challenge, J. I am particularly fond of the first stanza in how you deftly worked in the rhymes be and assonance breathe. Brilliant.
The entire piece have an overall serene tone which is a much needed quality in this noisy world.
Great job and a fine addition to the club.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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This is a terrific response to the Free Verse Club Challenge, J. I am particularly fond of the first stanza in how you deftly worked in the rhymes be and assonance breathe. Brilliant.
The entire piece have an overall serene tone which is a much needed quality in this noisy world.
Great job and a fine addition to the club.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Gloria, thank you for your review and validation on A Quiet Place.
Comment from Susan Morritt
This is a beautiful poem. You have used "A" words that seamlessly fit into the gist of the poem. I especially liked "the grist mill of life" and "avoid the clatter of noise, toys". Also, your use of all five words in the final stanza is creative.
Susan
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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This is a beautiful poem. You have used "A" words that seamlessly fit into the gist of the poem. I especially liked "the grist mill of life" and "avoid the clatter of noise, toys". Also, your use of all five words in the final stanza is creative.
Susan
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Susan, I delight that "A Quiet Place" read well for you. thank you for your review and validation for this poem
Comment from Frank Jauregui
I enjoyed your poem using the letter A. It is true that a truly "quiet place" is so difficult to acquire because it not only requires the silence of sound from without but the peace of the heart within to find it.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed your poem using the letter A. It is true that a truly "quiet place" is so difficult to acquire because it not only requires the silence of sound from without but the peace of the heart within to find it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Frank, thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, JLR,
'A Quiet Place' is a fine free verse poem using the letter A. I agree with you. To be aware and stay in the moment is the best way to stay center and not worry about things we can't control. Well done, my friend,
Gypsy
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Hello, JLR,
'A Quiet Place' is a fine free verse poem using the letter A. I agree with you. To be aware and stay in the moment is the best way to stay center and not worry about things we can't control. Well done, my friend,
Gypsy
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Gypsy, thank you for your review and validation on A Quiet Place.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting way to write a poem. The poem tells the way to find the inner peace we all wish for and need. It is necessary to stop and get out of the fast lane just to find ourselves. Well thought out and written.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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This is an interesting way to write a poem. The poem tells the way to find the inner peace we all wish for and need. It is necessary to stop and get out of the fast lane just to find ourselves. Well thought out and written.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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thaites, thank you for your review and validation on A Quiet Place.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
AAAAAA-plus with the AAAAAAlliteration! AAAAAAAh, how well you recommend mindfulness. I like the mindless games and silly things that distract. Meaning, I like them as used in the poem (And Alas As in many mindless hours so indulging). Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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AAAAAA-plus with the AAAAAAlliteration! AAAAAAAh, how well you recommend mindfulness. I like the mindless games and silly things that distract. Meaning, I like them as used in the poem (And Alas As in many mindless hours so indulging). Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Liz, I smile back! Thank you for such a warm review and comments.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
HI thank you so much for the great advice. Many of us do need to know the art of fing peace which is never easy in this hustle bustle.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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HI thank you so much for the great advice. Many of us do need to know the art of fing peace which is never easy in this hustle bustle.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Benny, each of us has a "best methods" to employ to quiet our monkey -minds, thanks for allowing me to emote my thoughts on this topic.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Your five words are very flexible in that they depict so much. The being in the moment and finding inner peace declarations are glorious.
"So, the art begins being aware
and thus to avoid the angst of failing
to find the ardor within a quiet space."
Using them all in the last stanza and making sense, is genius.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Your five words are very flexible in that they depict so much. The being in the moment and finding inner peace declarations are glorious.
"So, the art begins being aware
and thus to avoid the angst of failing
to find the ardor within a quiet space."
Using them all in the last stanza and making sense, is genius.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Raffaelina, thank you, I really appreciate your validation especially fo the last stanza. I really spent a great deal of time to make the summary tight.
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? and you succeeded.
