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Haiku(wintry waves billow)

Haiku

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Comment from Patty Palmer
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I love the water. The waves, the mist coming off of the waves, and the sand between my toes all make me smile! To look out at the horizon and see nothing but sky and blue water. OKPa, now I'm ready to go on vacation! Byeeee all!
Nice poem!
Patty


 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Great review zanya
reply by Patty Palmer on 09-Mar-2020
    Your're welcome!
    Patty
Comment from Gail Denham
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It's marvelous to watch the mighty waves in winter - not long ago, we were at Yachats (Oregon) - one my favorite places - where the waves were unusually high - inspiring to see the crashing of those waves on the rocks.
Nice poem

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written haiku about the billowing waves in wintertime usually looks very angry when it splash against the rocks nearby the shore.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Haiku (wintry waves billow) is short, succinct and very much to the point.
With a minimum of words, this talented poet's has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for those very encouraging words zanya
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 09-Mar-2020

    zanya,
    you're very welcome,
    the Duchess
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of wintery waves at the seashore.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Gloria ....
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I can see this all playing out. Superb entry into the haiku contest and you bet this is climate turbulence.

Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with a beautifully written contest entry.

Gloria

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Haiku(wintry waves billow) is a fine entry for the haiku contest.5/7/5 syllables count. The presentation is beautiful. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy ð???

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful offering of a beach scene for your haiku this evening... wonderful to imagine the waves as they build against the seashore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Ulla
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Yes, zanya, I liked this haiku and I liked it a lot. it has great imagery and the satori says it all the kigo will be winter as it clearly says. Great entry for the contest and good luck. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This poem is short and sweet and it is a respectable entry for the Haiku contest. The words convey a message that makes me think of climate change and the picture is a great addition.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
    Thanks for reviewing zanya