Haiku(wintry waves billow)
Haiku21 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I love the water. The waves, the mist coming off of the waves, and the sand between my toes all make me smile! To look out at the horizon and see nothing but sky and blue water. OKPa, now I'm ready to go on vacation! Byeeee all!
Nice poem!
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
I love the water. The waves, the mist coming off of the waves, and the sand between my toes all make me smile! To look out at the horizon and see nothing but sky and blue water. OKPa, now I'm ready to go on vacation! Byeeee all!
Nice poem!
Patty
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Great review zanya
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Your're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Gail Denham
It's marvelous to watch the mighty waves in winter - not long ago, we were at Yachats (Oregon) - one my favorite places - where the waves were unusually high - inspiring to see the crashing of those waves on the rocks.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
It's marvelous to watch the mighty waves in winter - not long ago, we were at Yachats (Oregon) - one my favorite places - where the waves were unusually high - inspiring to see the crashing of those waves on the rocks.
Nice poem
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the billowing waves in wintertime usually looks very angry when it splash against the rocks nearby the shore.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
A very well-written haiku about the billowing waves in wintertime usually looks very angry when it splash against the rocks nearby the shore.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Haiku (wintry waves billow) is short, succinct and very much to the point.
With a minimum of words, this talented poet's has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
"Haiku (wintry waves billow) is short, succinct and very much to the point.
With a minimum of words, this talented poet's has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for those very encouraging words zanya
zanya,
you're very welcome,
the Duchess
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of wintery waves at the seashore.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
I think this is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry contest.
This short verse tells of wintery waves at the seashore.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Gloria ....
I can see this all playing out. Superb entry into the haiku contest and you bet this is climate turbulence.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with a beautifully written contest entry.
Gloria
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
I can see this all playing out. Superb entry into the haiku contest and you bet this is climate turbulence.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with a beautifully written contest entry.
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Haiku(wintry waves billow) is a fine entry for the haiku contest.5/7/5 syllables count. The presentation is beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy ð???
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
Haiku(wintry waves billow) is a fine entry for the haiku contest.5/7/5 syllables count. The presentation is beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy ð???
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering of a beach scene for your haiku this evening... wonderful to imagine the waves as they build against the seashore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
A beautiful offering of a beach scene for your haiku this evening... wonderful to imagine the waves as they build against the seashore! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Ulla
Yes, zanya, I liked this haiku and I liked it a lot. it has great imagery and the satori says it all the kigo will be winter as it clearly says. Great entry for the contest and good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
Yes, zanya, I liked this haiku and I liked it a lot. it has great imagery and the satori says it all the kigo will be winter as it clearly says. Great entry for the contest and good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is short and sweet and it is a respectable entry for the Haiku contest. The words convey a message that makes me think of climate change and the picture is a great addition.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
This poem is short and sweet and it is a respectable entry for the Haiku contest. The words convey a message that makes me think of climate change and the picture is a great addition.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020
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Thanks for reviewing zanya