Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Perfect artwork to compliment this lovely haiku. I enjoyed the alliteration with willowy wave. Very nice satori line to finished the poem.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

In three short lines you have captured the power and magnificence of nature. Winter waves are turbulent, yet beautiful. I enjoyed the read. Great entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Great review zanya

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

You give us a much broader commentary with your satori ending here in this well written haiku. The climate changes have affected the ocean. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Hello there, my friend. This is a very nice haiku entry. Nicely done.
Good luck! Enjoy your week. ~Kerry.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Don't tell Al Gore about climate turbulence. He'll make a world wide fight against the wind. Like Caligula, he will march an army to the sea and command them to defeat it.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from estory

Excellent

Great balance, great nature image, nice oriental feel, and I think you handled the alliterations really well. Nice job with the 'w' sounds in line one, and the 'r' sounds in line two, and I liked the epiphany moment in line three where the rolling waves get lifted from the image into this sense of a greater force, this 'climate turbulence'. estory

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

A most encouraging review zanya

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

As soon as the word 'climate' is mentioned it will polarise the 2 camps of naysayers and believers that yes, we do indeed have turbulent change coming upon us. The waves tell the story in your succinct and well written poem.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Yes so much difference of opinion around this topic ! Thanks for rev iewing zanya

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Climate change is blamed for everything these days and here you have the waves subject to climate turbulence, a fun poem, much enjoyed Zanya, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Good

Vivid and crisp. Nice alliteration with the wintry waves. Also a fresh pairing of those words. Is the climate turbulence a reference to global warming, I wonder? Regardless, a fine choice. Cheers. LIZ (I sign off with thanks for boosing me to reviewer level five!)

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this descriptive piece. You have smoothly simultaneously described a winter scene while implying a point about climate change.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2020

Thanks for a superb review zanya