Morning Dew
Kyrielle Sonnet27 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
Wow! This is so filled with imagery. I just love this. And sip a drop of morning dew! What a pretty line and it fits in every stanza. You did an amazing job with this one.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Wow! This is so filled with imagery. I just love this. And sip a drop of morning dew! What a pretty line and it fits in every stanza. You did an amazing job with this one.
Drew xx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello Drew. Thank you so much for your lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from damommy
This is a lovely Kryielle Sonnet. I especially liked the reflections of the bumblebees. Your photo enhances your words. Great imagery really took me to your garden. I think the restrictions of that couplet made for a strange line. Maybe changing the first line would make a difference. Just a little tweaking.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This is a lovely Kryielle Sonnet. I especially liked the reflections of the bumblebees. Your photo enhances your words. Great imagery really took me to your garden. I think the restrictions of that couplet made for a strange line. Maybe changing the first line would make a difference. Just a little tweaking.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Yvonne. Thank you so very much... I had a different closing couplet, but Jim reminded me that with a KS, I needed to use the first line combined with the refrain ~ hence the skewed closing. I will go back and see what can be done...you and Helen both mentioned it . ;). Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
That certainly is a lovely photo, and it reflects the mood of your poem. There's great sound in your repeating line of 'to sip a drop of morning dew" and the variations you've used. The use of colors pink, white, and green adds to the visual appeal. In the morning, the garden brings a sense of charm and well-being. judi
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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That certainly is a lovely photo, and it reflects the mood of your poem. There's great sound in your repeating line of 'to sip a drop of morning dew" and the variations you've used. The use of colors pink, white, and green adds to the visual appeal. In the morning, the garden brings a sense of charm and well-being. judi
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much Judi. I am delighted you liked it and thought the colors added to it. :). Hugs.
Melissa
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You're very welcome. It sounds like a lovely place. judi
Comment from Joan E.
I thoroughly enjoyed the scene you captured in your Kyrielle Sonnet with its rhymes and repeats. I could see and hear the creatures in your colorful garden that was reinforced by the dreamy photograph. Big cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I thoroughly enjoyed the scene you captured in your Kyrielle Sonnet with its rhymes and repeats. I could see and hear the creatures in your colorful garden that was reinforced by the dreamy photograph. Big cheers- Joan
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hello sweet Joan!! Good morning. I am delighted you liked it and hope it helps you have a lovely day!! Hugs!
Melissa
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Many thanks for your warmhearted wishes. Enjoy your garden and have a productive, new week- Joan
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great writing in this very well written poems that flows with smooth rhyme and rhythm. You have mastered writing rhyming poetry about nature. I would give you six stars if I had it.
Bill
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Great writing in this very well written poems that flows with smooth rhyme and rhythm. You have mastered writing rhyming poetry about nature. I would give you six stars if I had it.
Bill
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful and encouraging review, Bill. Sooo appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful kyrielle sonnet, Melissa - and even if that isn't your garden, I imagine it is because you are always inspired by beauty like this. I noticed that you modified the repeating line in the third quatrain and the final line. So was the "Pink" sipping or the sky at the end?
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Beautiful kyrielle sonnet, Melissa - and even if that isn't your garden, I imagine it is because you are always inspired by beauty like this. I noticed that you modified the repeating line in the third quatrain and the final line. So was the "Pink" sipping or the sky at the end?
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I think they both sipped the morning dew, Helen. I had a different ending, but Jim drew my attention to the fact that the last couplet needed to be the first line of the poem combined with the refrain... Hence, the closing couplet... I wondered about it, but just went with it. Thanks so very much.
Melissa
Comment from country ranch writer
Beautiful and enjoyed reading all the way through picturing their every move as the come on through to start there day of with sip of the welcome sips of the early morning dew.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Beautiful and enjoyed reading all the way through picturing their every move as the come on through to start there day of with sip of the welcome sips of the early morning dew.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Barbara... thank you so much for your comments on this sonnet!!! Much appreciated.
Melissa
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Melissa, this is just beautiful my sweet friend...
makes me wish Spring were here...sigh...I love your poem sweet girl...and love this beautiful picture...very well written...wish this were my garden too...so good to see you...
I had to take some time off to fix my eyes...2 surgeries...the doctor said I can come back...but take breaks when reading and writing...I'll work on it...LOL...
I wish I had patience to do sonnets...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Melissa, this is just beautiful my sweet friend...
makes me wish Spring were here...sigh...I love your poem sweet girl...and love this beautiful picture...very well written...wish this were my garden too...so good to see you...
I had to take some time off to fix my eyes...2 surgeries...the doctor said I can come back...but take breaks when reading and writing...I'll work on it...LOL...
I wish I had patience to do sonnets...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hello, sweet Linda!!! So delighted to hear from you and read that you liked this sonnet. I was concerned about you! Hope your eyes are up to FS and writing your lovely poetry!! Thank you.
Melissa
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their close to it...I'll work them in...LOL...fells good to even read a little...an you sweet girl are so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a beautifully written, descriptive poem. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind that we feel like we are there. The flow of your poem is peaceful.The poem's flow is peaceful. It's perfect for your poem. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This is a beautifully written, descriptive poem. Your great word choice paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind that we feel like we are there. The flow of your poem is peaceful.The poem's flow is peaceful. It's perfect for your poem. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Misty. So glad you liked it and found peace within its lines. I wish you a lovely day!!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
I apologize that I am out of six star ratings. This lovely poem is perfection. I love the repeated line, especially in the first stanza when the cooing turtledoves sip a drop of morning dew. What do you plan to do with all of your lovely poem, Melissa? They should be shared with a broader audience.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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I apologize that I am out of six star ratings. This lovely poem is perfection. I love the repeated line, especially in the first stanza when the cooing turtledoves sip a drop of morning dew. What do you plan to do with all of your lovely poem, Melissa? They should be shared with a broader audience.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Debbie. Thank you for your encouraging and lovely review. I do not have plans to share my poetry... I do not know of any other venue, and I don?t think my poetry is good enough for publishing... (not interested in self publishing.). But, for you to suggest it needs more exposure is a deep compliment that I cherish. Thanks so much, my friend.
Melissa
