Morning Dew
Kyrielle Sonnet27 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
This is a beautiful offering!
I love sunsets but there is something very unique as dawn approaches .
I love the silence from our chaotic world ( cars, people talking , their footsteps )....
..you get to hear the sweet melody of the sparrows ..the freshness of the air tickles your nostrils .. spiders are still sitting in the centre of their webs.. the grass is moist and has a scent ...
...when I had pets I would enjoy our morning walk, watching the sun rise on the steps of our church which looks down on our town...
the first rays make the dew drops sparkle like tiny diamonds .
It's sad to think there are so many people that have never seen how beautiful Mother Nature is .
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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This is a beautiful offering!
I love sunsets but there is something very unique as dawn approaches .
I love the silence from our chaotic world ( cars, people talking , their footsteps )....
..you get to hear the sweet melody of the sparrows ..the freshness of the air tickles your nostrils .. spiders are still sitting in the centre of their webs.. the grass is moist and has a scent ...
...when I had pets I would enjoy our morning walk, watching the sun rise on the steps of our church which looks down on our town...
the first rays make the dew drops sparkle like tiny diamonds .
It's sad to think there are so many people that have never seen how beautiful Mother Nature is .
Comment Written 11-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2020
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Franca... ciao and Happy Easter!!! I also love the freshness of the morning and was delighted to read such a lovely review as you wrote. Thank you, dear friend, for your lovely comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
I feel sick giving this a five. Please accept my five with compliments, dear Melissa. It will most likely put you in for All Time Best. How lovely this is, in both Sonnet and setting. Delicious.
I wish to be there! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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I feel sick giving this a five. Please accept my five with compliments, dear Melissa. It will most likely put you in for All Time Best. How lovely this is, in both Sonnet and setting. Delicious.
I wish to be there! Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hi Sweet Sal!! I really appreciate your review and the gift of an All Time Best Seal... your the best, dear friend.
Melissa
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a lovely poem. I like it all and the illustration is gorgeous. These are the lines that resonate most with me, although all are excellent:
My garden's charm envelops me,
a peaceful, warm complacency,
sweet inspiration comes anew,
with sips from drops of morning dew.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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This is a lovely poem. I like it all and the illustration is gorgeous. These are the lines that resonate most with me, although all are excellent:
My garden's charm envelops me,
a peaceful, warm complacency,
sweet inspiration comes anew,
with sips from drops of morning dew.
Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hello Marilyn. Thanks so much. I am really happy that you liked this Kyrielle Sonnet. I am so ready for springtime and my garden. :)
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
There is something almost magical about your words here, Melissa -- perhaps it's the morning dew...always a special time for us early risers or perhaps its just the gentle phrases you've penned to describe your vision, but this one just sings to the reader in a soft piano melody.... WONDERFUL!! :) Thanx for sharing, my lady - your rhythm and rhyme is flawless as always! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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There is something almost magical about your words here, Melissa -- perhaps it's the morning dew...always a special time for us early risers or perhaps its just the gentle phrases you've penned to describe your vision, but this one just sings to the reader in a soft piano melody.... WONDERFUL!! :) Thanx for sharing, my lady - your rhythm and rhyme is flawless as always! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Hi Yvette. What a neat review. I am so delighted you liked it. :)
Melissa
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Melissa, this is a lovely poem about spring being in full bloom. I loved the picture to go with it, which made it all come vividly alive. Your poem is beautifully written. Well done. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Awe, Melissa, this is a lovely poem about spring being in full bloom. I loved the picture to go with it, which made it all come vividly alive. Your poem is beautifully written. Well done. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello Ulla. Thank you for your lovely words. I am anxiously awaiting springtime to arrive in full force. :)
Melissa
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I'm walking in the garden with you, revelling in the soft and peaceful pink, refreshed by those drops of morning dew. Such picturesque pairings painted with your words. Simply lovely.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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I'm walking in the garden with you, revelling in the soft and peaceful pink, refreshed by those drops of morning dew. Such picturesque pairings painted with your words. Simply lovely.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello Darlene. Thank you for your lovely comments. I am itching for springtime and its lovely blooms. :)
Melissa
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I'm not, not quite yet. I'm a New England gal. I just love it when it comes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Kyrielle sonnet about the morning dew we can sip from when the eastern sky is tinted pink, the humble bees and butterflies flying through the flower garden to find the freshest dew.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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A very well-written Kyrielle sonnet about the morning dew we can sip from when the eastern sky is tinted pink, the humble bees and butterflies flying through the flower garden to find the freshest dew.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thanks so very much Sandra!!
Melissa
Comment from Gloria ....
Whoa, that's a nice looking garden, Melissa. With the morning sun shining just right. Your poem is enchanting as you progress through each motion of the morning and accentuate that snapshot with the sips from drops of morning dew.
Elegant iambic metre and excellent rhymes.
I'll never tire of wonderful garden poems. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Whoa, that's a nice looking garden, Melissa. With the morning sun shining just right. Your poem is enchanting as you progress through each motion of the morning and accentuate that snapshot with the sips from drops of morning dew.
Elegant iambic metre and excellent rhymes.
I'll never tire of wonderful garden poems. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello Gloria. Thank you for your wonderful words. I am looking forward to lovely spring gardens with walks in the mornings. :)
Melissa
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Melissa,
I saved this sixth star just for you. What a great poem! Love the form. The repetition is very effective. Beautiful job with this one. Reminds me of Brooke's writing.
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hi Melissa,
I saved this sixth star just for you. What a great poem! Love the form. The repetition is very effective. Beautiful job with this one. Reminds me of Brooke's writing.
Thanks for sharing!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello KB... I am so happy you liked this Kyrielle sonnet and a garden walk in the spring. So grateful for your read and review!!
Melissa
Comment from kahpot
Well you had me in another world from your first stanza, an image so beautiful, your words in this form just flow and rhyme so wonderfully, an excellent work and very well written and presented, that photo is gorgeous, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Well you had me in another world from your first stanza, an image so beautiful, your words in this form just flow and rhyme so wonderfully, an excellent work and very well written and presented, that photo is gorgeous, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Hello Kah...Thank you so very much for your comments and review. I am delighted that you liked it!!
Melissa
