Sitting Vigil
In those hours at their bedside, you remember...13 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
What a beautiful poem, filled with love, longing, reminiscence and pathos. You set the scene beautifully, laying out the fun and loving times they shared, and relating each to a loud sound, making that final quiet about which the narrator complains that much harder to bear. This is a great entry for the contest, and I wish you luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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What a beautiful poem, filled with love, longing, reminiscence and pathos. You set the scene beautifully, laying out the fun and loving times they shared, and relating each to a loud sound, making that final quiet about which the narrator complains that much harder to bear. This is a great entry for the contest, and I wish you luck in the voting.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Your wonderful review is much appreciated. Thank you.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about watching someone in their sick bed is a long time of silence when we see them sleeping and we can't do anything for them but watch their quiet face in silence.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem about watching someone in their sick bed is a long time of silence when we see them sleeping and we can't do anything for them but watch their quiet face in silence.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Your review is much appreciated. Thank you.
Comment from moongirlwriter
Very sweet poem. . .I do hope he woke up and gave the nurses hell. :) Nice photo to accompany your well-written poem. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Very sweet poem. . .I do hope he woke up and gave the nurses hell. :) Nice photo to accompany your well-written poem. Best of luck to you in the contest. :)
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Your heartfelt review is much appreciated. Thank you.
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Hugs, my fellow poet. :)
