Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

with only so much to work with you said a lot. First me then about to be then we. You took it through from beginning to end! I think the picture that you chose went along with the poem so well. Good job!
Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thank you! A fun challenge:)
I appreciate your time and your good wishes.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest with three good rhymes that read smoothly. Something few entries in this contest do.
Perfect picture to match.
Very well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you, Robert:) A fun challenge.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork.
-Your note is appreciated.
-A good topic, with the
correct syllable count, and rhyme.
-It sounds like romance
is in the works.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you:)

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Feb-2020

You are welcome.

Comment from Aaqib Naeem

Excellent

This particular 1-6-1 contest leaves little room to experiment and write something that is complete in its essence and so...your entry is such a pleasant surprise! In such simple and commonly used words, you have managed to achieve what most will not! A complete story! Well done! Best wishes for the contest :-)

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020

Thank you, Aaqib, I appreciate your kind words :)

reply by Aaqib Naeem on 21-Feb-2020

You are most welcome! :-)