Comment from Aaqib Naeem

Excellent

Dawn, noon and night...you managed to cover all of them in this Haiku based poem! I did not know that we could stack more than one Haiku together for the contest! But yours makes perfect sense as it is and I wish you the best for the contest! Have a great day :-)

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020

Thanks for reveiwing. I am not sure about the stacked haikus for the contest either. But I have seen it done before. So I thought I'd give it a try.
Joan

reply by Aaqib Naeem on 01-Mar-2020

Yeah go for it! I like that you have taken a chance here! Best of luck with it :-)

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your haiku suite is creatively composed and lovely. You have wrapped your nature theme in an appealing blend of metaphor and personification.
I especially like line 1.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks for the thorough and precise review. Janice
Joan

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Haiku Poetry contest.
This series of Haikus telling us of day and night very nicely.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020

Thanks, Sharon, for the nice review and high rating.
Joan

Comment from Minglement

Excellent

I really enjoyed you entry for the Haiku Poetry Contest. The first one really captured that perfect few moments of dawn. All were very visual and beautiful. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020

Thanks for the strong possitive words and generous rating.
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Comment from Gail Denham

Excellent

Nice progression of haiku - the last stanza has a glitch - you'll probably find it. I like the dusty mauve of dawn. Many summer days, that's a lovely sight. I'm eager for spring now to see the sun turn the sky azure more - however I admit we've had sunny days, but it's very cold.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Thanks for the review. I will look for the glitch.
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Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Lovely series of haiku. Each one could stand alone. Each one paint a vivid picture with your very descriptive words.

Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Janet,
Thanks for the review and the good luck wishes.
Joan

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

I like this trio of haiku that paints each part of the day differently. From dawn til dusk we feel the serenity and enjoy the gradual changes, as we should in life in general. Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Thanks for reading and reviewing, June. Both are much apprecated.
Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am no expert at Haiku so I can't comment on the technical aspect here, but I felt the sun setting and the night descending and we are at peace whilst we sleep, good luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Dolly,
Thanks for the encouraging words
Joan

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Passage of Time", is a well-written, but somewhat depressing piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Duchess,
Thanks for your kind words and high rating. Both are much
appreciated
Joan

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku series about the passage of time from dawn to dusk and the changes in the sky that shows the wonder of the rising sun and the descend which is each beautiful in their own right.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020

Thanks for the insightful review and for all the stars, Sandra.

Joan