Consumption
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "I Spat On Your Grave! (A)"A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.
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Comment from Michael Devine
Whoa lot going on there, the next chapter's going to be a gory one. I might suggest losing the quotation marks, you don't need them just because you are narrating in the first person, just for spoken dialogue.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Whoa lot going on there, the next chapter's going to be a gory one. I might suggest losing the quotation marks, you don't need them just because you are narrating in the first person, just for spoken dialogue.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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'Why thanks forever for you Average review!'
Oh, by the way?'
"Do you always take two Stars away for your personal thoughts on style and Grammar?
You Fanstorian friends will do the same, you know?
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir here at Fanstory."
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It?s not my personal thoughts on style and grammar, it?s the rules of grammar, and it would really help if you lost the quotation marks.
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Your options are appreciated.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Doc Ricky, I didn't realize that you had a very hard childhood. And you no longer seem like the kind of person who would want to hurt any small animals. You must have been a very angry young man, at one time!
Was Jamie the cat really nasty? But more importantly, I'm so sorry that you were "abused and refused." That's terrible and sad.
I've actually been to Pittman. It's in the Gloucester area, had a boyfriend there once, and I am much better off without him.
You must have been disappointed when Mr. Jones promised employment to you and Charlie and then just disappeared on you!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Doc Ricky, I didn't realize that you had a very hard childhood. And you no longer seem like the kind of person who would want to hurt any small animals. You must have been a very angry young man, at one time!
Was Jamie the cat really nasty? But more importantly, I'm so sorry that you were "abused and refused." That's terrible and sad.
I've actually been to Pittman. It's in the Gloucester area, had a boyfriend there once, and I am much better off without him.
You must have been disappointed when Mr. Jones promised employment to you and Charlie and then just disappeared on you!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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The cat episode is fictional.
The birds fictional.
Everything else is true.
My mother should never have had children.
And yes I was very curious young child I did burn in sex not a lot I did shoot a rabbit I did try to shoot a pheasant.
That second chapters going to be mainly all completely fictional.
Thanks,
Ricky
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Hey Doc Ricky. I am so relieved to know that more than half of your "confessions" there were fictional (especially the cat story). I'm not sure what you meant by "burn in sex" but if you mean ordinary teenage desires, I think most of us go through that! (I wish I had more of that libido now, lol.) Sorry about the bird and the rabbit, but I know that a lot of young guys go hunting. You didn't know that the rabbit would run off, wounded. Maybe he or she survived, and continued to do more of what rabbits do! I don't agree that your mother shouldn't have had children, because you have a lot of good things to say and a lot of life left in you!
God bless you. - Mary Kay
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Thanks Mary my Fanstory best friend!
Ricky
Watching Charlie's Angels
(The Newer Version)
I'm Charlie!
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Of course you're Charlie! And I'm honored to be your FanStory best friend. If we ever run into any problems, I'll send you a message, and you can send your kick-@$$ chicks over here to help us. I'll have to put a blindfold on Jorge first -- only kidding -- he only has eyes for me! Yes, I'm blessed. God bless you too, Ricky. - Mary Kay
