Bill Discovers Emberliam
a one-scene script read aloud12 total reviews
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bill, Do you read them your silly stories about them? Do they like them? I bet they do. My son wanted me to write a book for him once. I did. He wanted it to be about Sonic the Hedgehog. I figured if I was going to write him a book, I could put a hedgehog in it, I could make it blue(ish) but it couldn't be Sonic, or I couldn't ever publish it. He was so mad at me for putting him in a book and that it wasn't about Sonic that he wouldn't even read it. Now I can't find it anywhere. All I can find is a character list. :(
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Hi Bill, Do you read them your silly stories about them? Do they like them? I bet they do. My son wanted me to write a book for him once. I did. He wanted it to be about Sonic the Hedgehog. I figured if I was going to write him a book, I could put a hedgehog in it, I could make it blue(ish) but it couldn't be Sonic, or I couldn't ever publish it. He was so mad at me for putting him in a book and that it wasn't about Sonic that he wouldn't even read it. Now I can't find it anywhere. All I can find is a character list. :(
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Keep looking. Thanks for giving this a look.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
Oh, how funny. Emberliam. Haha! I wondered if that was the representation of a Cockney accent or something. Together I bet they feel as forceful as a robot!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Oh, how funny. Emberliam. Haha! I wondered if that was the representation of a Cockney accent or something. Together I bet they feel as forceful as a robot!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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What was that accent? Something Slavic I think.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Bill, because I got a new stock of six stars, I wanted to be sure You got the First one. You deserve it for your creative dialog alone! ( and probably another for creative ideas! . . how clever to created a script about a goofy conversation with your grandchildren. . The great, all powerful, EMBERLIAM
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Dear Bill, because I got a new stock of six stars, I wanted to be sure You got the First one. You deserve it for your creative dialog alone! ( and probably another for creative ideas! . . how clever to created a script about a goofy conversation with your grandchildren. . The great, all powerful, EMBERLIAM
Comment Written 21-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Suzanna, for the terrific comments and sixth star. ill
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, you've created a great script describing a scene from you interaction with your grandchildren. It is wonderfully confirming and you certainly speak funny to them, and they seem to love it. Good luck. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Hi Bill, you've created a great script describing a scene from you interaction with your grandchildren. It is wonderfully confirming and you certainly speak funny to them, and they seem to love it. Good luck. Ulla:))
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Mistydawn
What a fun script. It's very imaginative. It sounds like you and your grandbabies have a lot of fun together. Little Kimberly will be talking non- stop before you know it. They grow so fast. It's very well-written, interesting, an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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What a fun script. It's very imaginative. It sounds like you and your grandbabies have a lot of fun together. Little Kimberly will be talking non- stop before you know it. They grow so fast. It's very well-written, interesting, an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you, MD
Comment from djsaxon
Love this, Bill. Grandchildren everywhere should be so lucky. The loving dynamic between "Gramps" and the children is made all the more potent by the kids speaking using 'conventional' English. A delight to read. Author notes were a bonus. Cheers - DJ
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Love this, Bill. Grandchildren everywhere should be so lucky. The loving dynamic between "Gramps" and the children is made all the more potent by the kids speaking using 'conventional' English. A delight to read. Author notes were a bonus. Cheers - DJ
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you, DJ, for the positive review. Bill
Comment from kahpot
You have set up a wonderful image here, your notes helped, of a granddad playing with his grand children, as granddad tries communicating in little language, had to read some lines a few times but got it all in the end, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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You have set up a wonderful image here, your notes helped, of a granddad playing with his grand children, as granddad tries communicating in little language, had to read some lines a few times but got it all in the end, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
This script tells a very cute story about how you as a grandfather have fun with your three little grandchildren. You really manage to make your words come out very humorously, and I think it must be extremely entertaining for the little ones. Then having the children climb onto each other to form a robot -- whose idea was that? Hilarious! That, and the idea of "collecting" Grandpa. Total cuteness! Very sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This script tells a very cute story about how you as a grandfather have fun with your three little grandchildren. You really manage to make your words come out very humorously, and I think it must be extremely entertaining for the little ones. Then having the children climb onto each other to form a robot -- whose idea was that? Hilarious! That, and the idea of "collecting" Grandpa. Total cuteness! Very sweet. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Mary Kay
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You're very welcome.
Comment from nomi338
Hm, I see we have been into the spirits again. You have such interesting trips. I wonder where they take you. What do you see, hear and do? I would like to follow and monitor your steps from time to time. LOL.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hm, I see we have been into the spirits again. You have such interesting trips. I wonder where they take you. What do you see, hear and do? I would like to follow and monitor your steps from time to time. LOL.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks, nomi. Grab a flashlight and a gunny sack.
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Heaven hep me. Here we goooooo!
Comment from judiverse
The way Bill speaks in this, it's sounds as if he's already been there. The children are rather precocious if they say "collect." Emily is quite advanced for one year old, and Bill seems a bit doddery to be the father. This sounds like fantasy. The robot is quite a surprise. Excellent description of the setting. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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The way Bill speaks in this, it's sounds as if he's already been there. The children are rather precocious if they say "collect." Emily is quite advanced for one year old, and Bill seems a bit doddery to be the father. This sounds like fantasy. The robot is quite a surprise. Excellent description of the setting. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Emily is almost five and this has all been exaggerated, unless you believe that nine month old Kimberly speaks in full sarcastic sentences. The robot is, of course, for not real.
