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A Collection of Heart Felt Poetry.

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Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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I recall tooth pain so severe it overwhelmed me. I couldn't sit or stand or lie down without pain. And no one would believe I was hurting so I can empathize.

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    Yes, this pain was so bad?
    I could feel the area throbbing, it was going into the bones of my nasal system, and up into my head!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024

    And, I just posted another issue with me called...
    "Discover Me?"
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Whew, Dr. Ricky!
I can empathize with your situation, and I definitely feel your pain having undergone a nightmarish incident with my dentist as well over a bridge. I am so glad you are no longer in pain!

Note:
Chatize (Chastise)

Take Care of Yourself!

diane

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    Fighting a new adversary!
    Shingles!
    Thanks,
    Ricky
Comment from Bill Schott
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This horror poem, Taste the Waste Upon My Face, shocks the reader with the thought of what this waste might be. After reader the backstory of the crazy dental trips the pain behind the words becomes clear. God I hate dentists.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
    Thanks Bill and I never did till now!
    Ricky
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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OMG I read the authors notes more than the piece itself and what an ordeal . Yes things have changed and some don't make a lick of sense to any of us,,,,

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
    Yes I should have put this in some kind of hard contest maybe the editor's notes would win it?
    Thanks,
    Ricky