Chain Around My Heart
Just yesterday...22 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Through an emotional, creative blend of literal and figurative language, you have conveyed a moving message about the paralyzing power of the heartbreak of lost love.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Through an emotional, creative blend of literal and figurative language, you have conveyed a moving message about the paralyzing power of the heartbreak of lost love.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Experience is a great teacher. Appreciate your precious review! xoxo
Comment from Gail Denham
Quite the visual poem. Full of emotion and regret, perhaps fear too. Where is that golden key. This poem could have all kinds of meaning. It could go towards a marriage that did not work - or a lost love who kissed and ran.
Good job.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Quite the visual poem. Full of emotion and regret, perhaps fear too. Where is that golden key. This poem could have all kinds of meaning. It could go towards a marriage that did not work - or a lost love who kissed and ran.
Good job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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If she only knew that key is in her own heart! Then she would be free! Thanks for appreciating this! xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
Very deep and crushing. I love the chain and key metaphor used ... The pic with the one with the chained heart jumping off a cliff. Why is love so painful? Why is there the other who shatters the heart once chained? Excellent!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Very deep and crushing. I love the chain and key metaphor used ... The pic with the one with the chained heart jumping off a cliff. Why is love so painful? Why is there the other who shatters the heart once chained? Excellent!
Drew xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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So true, it?s supposed to be ?love?! But when it turns one-sided, that?s what hurts! Thank you Drew!! xoxo
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Same here!
Comment from Patty Palmer
One minute life is bliss. Everything is perfect and the future is bright. All of a sudden he's gone and you are left hurting. He has you bound in chains!
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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One minute life is bliss. Everything is perfect and the future is bright. All of a sudden he's gone and you are left hurting. He has you bound in chains!
Patty
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks for reading Patty! I appreciate your stars and feedback! Have a great day! xoxo
Comment from Boogienights
This is a sad and emotionally stirring poem. It's an excellent poem that many can relate to. It's sad when you feel trapped in a relationship that's gone sour. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is a sad and emotionally stirring poem. It's an excellent poem that many can relate to. It's sad when you feel trapped in a relationship that's gone sour. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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So true! At least if your leaving, take the dang chain with you! haha! I appreciate you stopped to read! Have a great day! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a romance that becomes too intense and controlling, I have known love like this and I prefer my independence! I enjoyed your poem Diana and your anapestic-style mixed meter, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This sounds like a romance that becomes too intense and controlling, I have known love like this and I prefer my independence! I enjoyed your poem Diana and your anapestic-style mixed meter, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Me too! I am a Taurus and definitely can't be told what to do! LOL! He would probably be wearing that chain around his dang neck! haha! Thanks for enjoying, Dolly! xoxo
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Oh, fooled so quickly by a kiss! So often is the cry of lovers left with their hearts in chains. The image you chose is beautiful and compliments your work nicely.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Oh, fooled so quickly by a kiss! So often is the cry of lovers left with their hearts in chains. The image you chose is beautiful and compliments your work nicely.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks, Frank! appreciate you stopped to check it out! Have a great day! xoxo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about a love relationship that seems like heaven when it starts, ends up being a relationship with chains and no freedom to be yourself.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about a love relationship that seems like heaven when it starts, ends up being a relationship with chains and no freedom to be yourself.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much! appreciate you took time to stop and enjoy the work! Have a really great day! xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you tell the story of this troubling love relationship using questions in your poem. It shows how unsettling the difference is between the start of the romance to the controlling nature of the love.
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I like how you tell the story of this troubling love relationship using questions in your poem. It shows how unsettling the difference is between the start of the romance to the controlling nature of the love.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Amen! When you are in such a situation, you cannot help but have so many questions!! Appreciate your stars and feedback! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Like the formatting on this one with the repetitive just yesterday to constantly bring the reader in a state of confusion that you are feeling: standing here, looking back, how...?, just yesterday... Wonderfully done, my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Like the formatting on this one with the repetitive just yesterday to constantly bring the reader in a state of confusion that you are feeling: standing here, looking back, how...?, just yesterday... Wonderfully done, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thanks, appreciate! personally, I'd probably wrap that chain around his neck! LOL! No, I'm not really a violent person...??.. hmm..
LOL! so glad you like this one! :) xoxo
