Adieu, For Now
With the daffodils here, Spring is near!11 total reviews
Comment from Diana L Crawford
This is so beautiful and elegant in presentation. Daffodils won't show up until mid-April here unfortunately. They are a refreshing sign that warmer days are ahead! Good luck in your contest. xoxo
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is so beautiful and elegant in presentation. Daffodils won't show up until mid-April here unfortunately. They are a refreshing sign that warmer days are ahead! Good luck in your contest. xoxo
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from gingermo
You have made good use of alliteration in your eight word poem ... fragrant farewell and delightful daffodil. The personification of the daffodil kissing is especially poetic. The poem certainly gave me a sense of the coming of spring. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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You have made good use of alliteration in your eight word poem ... fragrant farewell and delightful daffodil. The personification of the daffodil kissing is especially poetic. The poem certainly gave me a sense of the coming of spring. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
At the start of winter we do indeed say good-bye to a lot of wonderful and beautiful things. We feel as if they are going away forever, but in truth they are resting so they can again shine bright when their time comes.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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At the start of winter we do indeed say good-bye to a lot of wonderful and beautiful things. We feel as if they are going away forever, but in truth they are resting so they can again shine bright when their time comes.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from May 1
That's such a nice choice of topic. :) I love daffodils so this poem works perfectly for me. Also, I love your perfect choice of vocabulary and imagery. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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That's such a nice choice of topic. :) I love daffodils so this poem works perfectly for me. Also, I love your perfect choice of vocabulary and imagery. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you. Have a great day!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
This is a nice entry for the eight words contest. The presentation is very pretty. Your words flow nicely. You managed to form a concrete picture in a few words. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is a nice entry for the eight words contest. The presentation is very pretty. Your words flow nicely. You managed to form a concrete picture in a few words. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy Blue! Have a great day!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Oh those lovely daffodils. How beautiful they are in their simplicity. How simple they are in their beauty. How very much like this poem they are. This poem in simply beautiful.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Oh those lovely daffodils. How beautiful they are in their simplicity. How simple they are in their beauty. How very much like this poem they are. This poem in simply beautiful.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much!!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt eight-word poem about the yellow daffodils that predict the winter months will retreat and Spring will take his place soon. The winter can become very boring at the end.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt eight-word poem about the yellow daffodils that predict the winter months will retreat and Spring will take his place soon. The winter can become very boring at the end.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Sandra!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It always amazes me how hardy these delicate blooms are when they flower among the ice and snow and it is almost as if they are yellow flags of surrender to change the season to spring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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It always amazes me how hardy these delicate blooms are when they flower among the ice and snow and it is almost as if they are yellow flags of surrender to change the season to spring, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Dolly!!
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Something about delightful daffodil kisses and the yellow of the flower and background that just seems the perfect, fragrant farewell to winter and the snow that fades away behind it. Everything just comes together beautifully. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Something about delightful daffodil kisses and the yellow of the flower and background that just seems the perfect, fragrant farewell to winter and the snow that fades away behind it. Everything just comes together beautifully. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Wils
This brings a beautiful picture to mind. I love daffodils and the changing of the seasons brings them all out. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Geoff
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This brings a beautiful picture to mind. I love daffodils and the changing of the seasons brings them all out. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Geoff
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you!!
