Finally Spring
A Spring poem all in F13 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, I have read a lot of spring poems this morning. Your poem is very nice. I can imagine all the new flowers and colors. Spring is one of my two favorite seasons. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Wow, I have read a lot of spring poems this morning. Your poem is very nice. I can imagine all the new flowers and colors. Spring is one of my two favorite seasons. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy Blue Rose. This spring poem is not one of my master pieces of course, but so much fun to do it!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is very creative, writing about spring or with the letter F. In some ways it's very sad poem. I love the line about the freckled nose from sun rays. That was always me until I became older and started wearing sunblock! Very well- written poem, and a good entry for the spring contest. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is very creative, writing about spring or with the letter F. In some ways it's very sad poem. I love the line about the freckled nose from sun rays. That was always me until I became older and started wearing sunblock! Very well- written poem, and a good entry for the spring contest. Good luck!
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you Therese, for your nice review. Want a secret? My nose starts freckling with the first rays of every spring sun.
Comment from Mr.write_4u
I enjoyed reading this one. Interesting choice to set up such boundaries for this one, but you did it well. The transition from winter to spring was evident. And you created many pleasing visuals.
Happy writing,
Larry
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading this one. Interesting choice to set up such boundaries for this one, but you did it well. The transition from winter to spring was evident. And you created many pleasing visuals.
Happy writing,
Larry
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Larry, thank you. I know it is not a masterpiece, but I had so much fun writing it!
