Finally Spring
A Spring poem all in F13 total reviews
Comment from Frank Jauregui
Nice how you composed this poem, all in F, and yet it all seems to make sense and flow together all the way through. The text is shaped and positioned such that it seems to be a handle to a dainty square mirror which is made up by the painting you chose, perfectly reflecting the image of spring conveyed by your poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Nice how you composed this poem, all in F, and yet it all seems to make sense and flow together all the way through. The text is shaped and positioned such that it seems to be a handle to a dainty square mirror which is made up by the painting you chose, perfectly reflecting the image of spring conveyed by your poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hello Frank, that is a nice comment! I was not even aware of the mirror shape, but it is a nice extra to the poem. It was fun to write. Thank you for the stars!
Comment from Gideon300
Well here's hoping for a better spring than that next time.
I do love spring and how everything burst into life.
Though as your poem reflects there will always be some with some skinned knees.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Well here's hoping for a better spring than that next time.
I do love spring and how everything burst into life.
Though as your poem reflects there will always be some with some skinned knees.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gideon. Skinned knees and all...nice comment!
Comment from papa55mike
Even after the frost, spring will return in all of its glory. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Even after the frost, spring will return in all of its glory. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Papa Mike, thank you!
Comment from Susan Larson
This is a Fantastic Fanciful image of spring with the soft breeze of the "f" sound gently blowing in each line. I read it three times just to Feel it over and over, and remind myself that the horrible rain we've been having will soon be over ... bringing in the Flowers.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This is a Fantastic Fanciful image of spring with the soft breeze of the "f" sound gently blowing in each line. I read it three times just to Feel it over and over, and remind myself that the horrible rain we've been having will soon be over ... bringing in the Flowers.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Susan, thanks a lot for your review. It was such fun to do!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this well thought out work you've penned here. The use of f on the first line of every line is excellent. I also like the colorful and descriptive wording you've used. Thanks for sharing this well written ode to Spring. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I like this well thought out work you've penned here. The use of f on the first line of every line is excellent. I also like the colorful and descriptive wording you've used. Thanks for sharing this well written ode to Spring. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Jeffrey, thank you. My F-spring poem was so fun to do!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, my friend. This is a "F"antastic poem for Spring done in all "F"
A lovely contest entry, good luck to you. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello there, my friend. This is a "F"antastic poem for Spring done in all "F"
A lovely contest entry, good luck to you. ~Kerry
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Kerry, "F"or this "F"ine review.
Comment from Boogienights
Another great entry for the Spring contest. I love the way your words paint a picture..I can see, smell and feel the joy. I wish you the best in the contest, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Another great entry for the Spring contest. I love the way your words paint a picture..I can see, smell and feel the joy. I wish you the best in the contest, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Boogienights, thank you for this nice review
Comment from Teri7
This is a very lovely poem you have penned for the writing prompt about a spring poem all in F. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is a very lovely poem you have penned for the writing prompt about a spring poem all in F. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Teri, thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about Spring time is a good time to fall in love and see the love grows as the season progress but sometimes we fall for the wrong person and the couple constantly fighting.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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A very well-written poem about Spring time is a good time to fall in love and see the love grows as the season progress but sometimes we fall for the wrong person and the couple constantly fighting.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Sandra, thank you for your review.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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thank you, 13thpoet!
