Narcissism
A sardonic twist.12 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This topic always catches me, I was married to one and you caught it perfectly in few words. I would have metered it closer together like :
A flaw, you say? In me? You jest.
'Cause as you see, I am the best!
Good luck unknown poet.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This topic always catches me, I was married to one and you caught it perfectly in few words. I would have metered it closer together like :
A flaw, you say? In me? You jest.
'Cause as you see, I am the best!
Good luck unknown poet.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Narcissism is for many, an all-incompassing part of a borderline condition. But I heard at a conference, " we all have a summer home on Borderline Island. It just depends upon how much time we spend there. Some move in." This was a good topic to address especially in the current political climate. Thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Narcissism is for many, an all-incompassing part of a borderline condition. But I heard at a conference, " we all have a summer home on Borderline Island. It just depends upon how much time we spend there. Some move in." This was a good topic to address especially in the current political climate. Thank you.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review and for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Raul1
I see that this person doesn't think he has the flaw in him. I like how this is funny in a sense that he thinks he's perfect, but is imperfect. Excellent work! Good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I see that this person doesn't think he has the flaw in him. I like how this is funny in a sense that he thinks he's perfect, but is imperfect. Excellent work! Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the great review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Minglement
Yup! That's a big flaw, lol :) This is a fun entry in the I Am Not Perfect Contest. I miss some artwork, but I'm not sure what would fit your poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Yup! That's a big flaw, lol :) This is a fun entry in the I Am Not Perfect Contest. I miss some artwork, but I'm not sure what would fit your poem. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I'm afraid I haven't mastered the addition of artwork. I would have added a lady smiling in a mirror (if I had the ability....perhaps in time). Thank you for the review.
Comment from May 1
Haha, I love this. It was very fun to read and it's quite a different approach to the topic which I love. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and think it's a great writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Haha, I love this. It was very fun to read and it's quite a different approach to the topic which I love. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and think it's a great writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the very kind words!
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Short, sweet, and directly to the point. Great twist in this short tale of introspection. Should be a shoe-in to win (as it's the best!). Wish you well in the contest... ...ec
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Short, sweet, and directly to the point. Great twist in this short tale of introspection. Should be a shoe-in to win (as it's the best!). Wish you well in the contest... ...ec
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the very kind words! I do hope you are correct!!
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you're welcome... ...ec
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
This is a good entry for the contest. I like your poem and presentation. You followed the rules well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend,
This is a good entry for the contest. I like your poem and presentation. You followed the rules well. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
A great poetic illustration of a narcissist! The rhymes are points of proof where jest counteracts the opinion of one who sees the narcissist as flawed and best proves the narcissism. A cool poem of deviant psychology.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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A great poetic illustration of a narcissist! The rhymes are points of proof where jest counteracts the opinion of one who sees the narcissist as flawed and best proves the narcissism. A cool poem of deviant psychology.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Your review is much appreciated.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! :) :) Well, now there's someone that has but a single couplet because there's nothing else to say here.... fun offering for the contest today -- best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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LOL!! :) :) Well, now there's someone that has but a single couplet because there's nothing else to say here.... fun offering for the contest today -- best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the good wishes and the terrific review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the I Am Not Perfect writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a sardonic twist.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the I Am Not Perfect writing prompt.
This short verse tells of a sardonic twist.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind words and good wishes.
