Personal Thoughts
A contest entry25 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
Don't believe that we should give up. But pray, pray all day long - for our country, our President - for the poor folks in China where there is complete misery - even in big cities, people cannot go out of their homes - or speak anything against the state. It's pretty horrible.
Good job with this poem to make us think.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Don't believe that we should give up. But pray, pray all day long - for our country, our President - for the poor folks in China where there is complete misery - even in big cities, people cannot go out of their homes - or speak anything against the state. It's pretty horrible.
Good job with this poem to make us think.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gail for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty word poem about the state of the world that seems to be a great mess with dangerous viruses and illnesses that can wipe out mankind for ages.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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A very well-written twenty word poem about the state of the world that seems to be a great mess with dangerous viruses and illnesses that can wipe out mankind for ages.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Sandra for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, aryr.
-You have used your
twenty words well.
-A time topic and
good imagery.
-Your note is appreciated,
but I am wondering if
that is your opinion,
maybe the poem should
reflect that. Your notes
are profound and would
make really good statements.
-Just ideas; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation, aryr.
-You have used your
twenty words well.
-A time topic and
good imagery.
-Your note is appreciated,
but I am wondering if
that is your opinion,
maybe the poem should
reflect that. Your notes
are profound and would
make really good statements.
-Just ideas; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Pam for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
Alie I understand your thoughts and it's a good entry but you have too many syllables. About 23 I think. Use world's and ommit so. The other "Such"? :) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Alie I understand your thoughts and it's a good entry but you have too many syllables. About 23 I think. Use world's and ommit so. The other "Such"? :) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Jose for reading, reviewing and your great comments. I don't think it was a syllable count but rather a word count of 20.
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My bad Alie. Using a phone making mistakes. :) Take care.
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Awww not a problem Jose, how is the house coming along?
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Personal Thoughts", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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"Personal Thoughts", is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
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aryr,
you're very welcome
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess
aryr, you're very welcome.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from Susan Larson
Give: the quality or state of being resilient; springiness.
Yes, let's give a little give to the word "give" and be resilient and spring UP in the midst of all that's screwed up. Rey thought provoking twenty words.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Give: the quality or state of being resilient; springiness.
Yes, let's give a little give to the word "give" and be resilient and spring UP in the midst of all that's screwed up. Rey thought provoking twenty words.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Susan for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from robyn corum
Alie,
Oh, wow. Having a bit of an off day, eh? Sometimes I think many of us can look at the world news and take this stance. *smile*
But then we must shake our heads and minds and bodies and get rid of that funk (or not watch the news in the first place) and get back to the business of living. haha
I note that your word count is just right, btw -
Thanks and good luck! (Good to see you!)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Alie,
Oh, wow. Having a bit of an off day, eh? Sometimes I think many of us can look at the world news and take this stance. *smile*
But then we must shake our heads and minds and bodies and get rid of that funk (or not watch the news in the first place) and get back to the business of living. haha
I note that your word count is just right, btw -
Thanks and good luck! (Good to see you!)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Robyn for reading, reviewing and your great comments. LOL not really an off day, just recovering.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I like the photo you choose to go with your write they are a perfect match your words are so true. But we should never give up. If we do we a truly doomed.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I like the photo you choose to go with your write they are a perfect match your words are so true. But we should never give up. If we do we a truly doomed.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Cookie for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
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it was my pleasure.
cookie
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The human race will never give up, but there is something trying to kill us! Your poem is profound and poignant and I so agree with you, love Dolly x
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The human race will never give up, but there is something trying to kill us! Your poem is profound and poignant and I so agree with you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Dolly for reading, reviewing and your great comments. Now that I am back I can review yours as well.
Comment from royowen
It's funny some of our people on a cruise have been at sea for ages, confined to their cabins because of the corona virus, the world gon mad my friend, an excellent entry in this 20 syllable contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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It's funny some of our people on a cruise have been at sea for ages, confined to their cabins because of the corona virus, the world gon mad my friend, an excellent entry in this 20 syllable contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you Roy for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
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My pleasure
