Personal Thoughts
A contest entry25 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
You pose a solemn question. In the backdrop of all the chaos in the world, we could easily choose to give up. But as you say in your notes, it's these times of struggle that will help us grow more into all that God wants us to develop - into compassion and caring.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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You pose a solemn question. In the backdrop of all the chaos in the world, we could easily choose to give up. But as you say in your notes, it's these times of struggle that will help us grow more into all that God wants us to develop - into compassion and caring.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your fantastic comments.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Then who would form the words and thoughts we are on this earth in this lifetime to write? There are too many pages left empty when someone gives up. Their souls become confused. I'm glad you pose the question to invite the reader to contemplate their purpose in this lifetime. Well planned.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Then who would form the words and thoughts we are on this earth in this lifetime to write? There are too many pages left empty when someone gives up. Their souls become confused. I'm glad you pose the question to invite the reader to contemplate their purpose in this lifetime. Well planned.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2020
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Wow, it is amazing that you would focus in on a person's purpose in life. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Alie. I'm happy that you've come to the same conclusion that I have about this--we must never give in, never give up. The image to accompany your 20-word poem is perfect. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hi Alie. I'm happy that you've come to the same conclusion that I have about this--we must never give in, never give up. The image to accompany your 20-word poem is perfect. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much Marilyn for reading, reviewing and the fact that we never give up.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Aryr,
I enjoyed your A contest entry poem, 'Personal Thoughts'.
I don't think that giving up is the answer. As long as there is life there is hope. That is my motto. You followed the contest requirements. Good job.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Hello, Aryr,
I enjoyed your A contest entry poem, 'Personal Thoughts'.
I don't think that giving up is the answer. As long as there is life there is hope. That is my motto. You followed the contest requirements. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments.
Comment from Therese Caron
I don't think we can ever give up, although it is tempting at times.I feel like politically right now. I don't feel like the greatest nation in the world anymore. That makes me very sad. I think we have to keep trying. Your thoughts are clear and concise and the picture complements your writing well.Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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I don't think we can ever give up, although it is tempting at times.I feel like politically right now. I don't feel like the greatest nation in the world anymore. That makes me very sad. I think we have to keep trying. Your thoughts are clear and concise and the picture complements your writing well.Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments, Theresa. And of course the good luck wishes.
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
I admire your thought-provoking 20 Word Poem! It is sad to think we might give up! I am an optimist but I respect your thoughts!
My best,
Deborah
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Dear Author,
I admire your thought-provoking 20 Word Poem! It is sad to think we might give up! I am an optimist but I respect your thoughts!
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and your great comments Deborah, if you read the notes I expressed not giving up.
Comment from Boogienights
I like your poem and I'm glad you didn't mean it about giving up. It's a great contest entry, with the proper word count required. A unique twist on how you view the world. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I like your poem and I'm glad you didn't mean it about giving up. It's a great contest entry, with the proper word count required. A unique twist on how you view the world. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, your great comments and of course the good wishes.
Comment from karenina
I'm glad you added your author's comment... No giving up on this Coronavirus or any other virus that tries to obliterate the human race...
In fact if we don't all smarten up and treat our planet right we won't have to worry about a VIRUS...seems we are our own worst enemy. I counted out your twenty words... (I'm a tad OCD)----and you've met the criteria, so good luck in the contest!---Karenina
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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I'm glad you added your author's comment... No giving up on this Coronavirus or any other virus that tries to obliterate the human race...
In fact if we don't all smarten up and treat our planet right we won't have to worry about a VIRUS...seems we are our own worst enemy. I counted out your twenty words... (I'm a tad OCD)----and you've met the criteria, so good luck in the contest!---Karenina
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, your great comments and of course the good wishes.
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Always my pleasure!--Karenina
Comment from Bicpen
It maybe me but it has good ideas with a good concept just needs improvement to set it up hopefully not for a big fall but better endeavours ... I liked it.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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It maybe me but it has good ideas with a good concept just needs improvement to set it up hopefully not for a big fall but better endeavours ... I liked it.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for reading, reviewing, your great comments.
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Comment from Auryn Eisley
A very well written and thought provoking poem. So many of us have these thought in light of tragedies on a personal or global scale. It can make us feel powerless until we realise we must keep going. Thank you for sharing your personal thoughts and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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A very well written and thought provoking poem. So many of us have these thought in light of tragedies on a personal or global scale. It can make us feel powerless until we realise we must keep going. Thank you for sharing your personal thoughts and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading, reviewing and your kind thoughts. Your good luck wishes are greatly appreciated.
