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The Surprise

100 Word Flash Fiction Contest Entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Love, expression and act in appreciation of love and gesture in manifestation of love is important and not the amount of gift or material offer or show, simplicity and natural expressiveness surprises sometime as token of love in relation; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Al. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this silly piece.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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Hahahaha! I'm glad you're not really such a fool as your main character. His wife might have wanted to throw the breakfast at him, unless she was very, very forgiving. I personally wouldn't have minded a nice breakfast in bed, but knowing my husband had wasted $200 on lottery tickets might have spoiled my appetite. It's a crazy story, but well done! Could anybody be that stupid? Just consider the divorce rate.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Mary. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 16-Feb-2020
    You're very welcome. I did enjoy your funny story. Blessings!