Out Standing Stories and Poems
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Comment from Tami Urbanek
Nice poem! A few words are capitalized that need to be lower case. A nice piece on seeing something after a sad event. Thank you for sharing your story!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Nice poem! A few words are capitalized that need to be lower case. A nice piece on seeing something after a sad event. Thank you for sharing your story!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I capitalize words that are important to me just my own personal feelings and style.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks true experience of life, life is mortal for immortal appreciation to the survivors; in God you trust, as you believe in God's justice for your living; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
Please correct the following line:
"It's mission is quite clear as now it's eyes open wide!"
("Its mission is quite clear as now its eyes open wide!")
Please check the typo:
Appiration!
(Apparition!)
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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This speaks true experience of life, life is mortal for immortal appreciation to the survivors; in God you trust, as you believe in God's justice for your living; well said, well done; enjoyed the read; thanks for sharing this, sponsoring membership.
Please correct the following line:
"It's mission is quite clear as now it's eyes open wide!"
("Its mission is quite clear as now its eyes open wide!")
Please check the typo:
Appiration!
(Apparition!)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Thanks just corrected.
Sometimes the cell phone doesn't use a spell check.
Doctor Ricky 1024
