Comment from Cindy Decker

Exceptional

Wonderful story with a very ironic, gummy end. A story should begin after 200 words, you artfully told a complete story in exactly 100 words. The ending leaves a lot of possibilities; but the irony is clear. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020

Thanks so much for your encouraging review. Much appreciated. Thanks too for the six stars.

Comment from nor84

Good

I didn't check the word count. Has to be 100 words not counting title. When I saw this listed as ' Biographical Non-Fiction,' I wanted to give you a heads-up that this contest is flash FICTION.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks, I guess I should remove the piece.

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

After thinking. Sister Mary Grace was real, but the encounter was fiction. I corrected the designations. Thanks.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written an excellent flash story for the contest
with a nice twist and bit of a surprise for Harry.
Meeting Mary Grace in a singles club would be more than a little strange.
We'll have nun of that here.
Well done
Robert

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Yes, you may call it nunsense, but it was interesting seeing her without her clothes, habit I mean. Thanks for the review.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello fellow writer. Thank you for sharing your flash fiction, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thanks for the read and review. Appreciated.