Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "twilight and you"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
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Comment from RodG
I also find twilight to be the most romantic time of day and like the Speaker's description of it as "dimming blue." It is the most tranquil time of day, thus stirring thoughts of his beloved. Nice use of rhyme. Rod
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I also find twilight to be the most romantic time of day and like the Speaker's description of it as "dimming blue." It is the most tranquil time of day, thus stirring thoughts of his beloved. Nice use of rhyme. Rod
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for understanding my poem!!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is good work. I love the beautiful artwork that accompanies your descriptive and well placed wording. I also like the rhyme that you've incorporated into this. Thanks for sharing this romantic, inspirational, and well written work. Great job and well done!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This is good work. I love the beautiful artwork that accompanies your descriptive and well placed wording. I also like the rhyme that you've incorporated into this. Thanks for sharing this romantic, inspirational, and well written work. Great job and well done!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the encouragement!!
