Shattered Pieces
A 5-7-7 poem...22 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
Your 5-7-7 format is right-on. The artwork really illustrates the shattered heart. The three lines flow together beautifully. You do an excellent job of showing the heartbreak that comes from a loved one walking away. That seems to be the MO of several males. judi
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Your 5-7-7 format is right-on. The artwork really illustrates the shattered heart. The three lines flow together beautifully. You do an excellent job of showing the heartbreak that comes from a loved one walking away. That seems to be the MO of several males. judi
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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This is one we?re I found the picture and I just had to interpret it with poetry! Thank you for appreciating!! xoxo
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You're welcome. Sometimes we can find inspiration from artwork. From music, as well. judi
Comment from patcelaw
When one that we love walks away, indeed it leaves the heart shattered into a million pieces. Have a nice weekend.
Patricia
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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When one that we love walks away, indeed it leaves the heart shattered into a million pieces. Have a nice weekend.
Patricia
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I loved this artwork and just had to interpret what it! Thanks for reading! Happy Valentine?s Day!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three-line poem about a heart breaking into a million pieces shattered everywhere when we watch someone special walking away from us and leaves us to pick up the pieces.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A very well-written three-line poem about a heart breaking into a million pieces shattered everywhere when we watch someone special walking away from us and leaves us to pick up the pieces.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you for appreciating! I saw the picture and just had to interpret it with poetry. Happy Valentine?s Day!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wonderfully emotional image there, Diana -- anyone who has ever been in such a position will feel the depth of your words! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Wonderfully emotional image there, Diana -- anyone who has ever been in such a position will feel the depth of your words! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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One of the few where I found pic first and then words just fell out my pen! It spoke to me and to many others here it seems! Thanks for appreciating! xoxo
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-7, Shattered Pieces, finds the wounded partner in a failed relationship literally coming apart as the realization of the end is clear............
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This 5-7-7, Shattered Pieces, finds the wounded partner in a failed relationship literally coming apart as the realization of the end is clear............
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you for taking time to read and give me feedback! xoxo
Comment from Ronni
Hi Diana,
Entire presentation shudders and aches from first view of pic
down to the very last word! Rejection or broken love's remains
always leaves such silent yet ever eerie pieces and jilted promises.
So much emotion in disintegrating pieces of cruel abandonment.
Awesome music video song deepens sense of pain. So much
trauma in those few eerie words.
Thanks for sharing dear.
Blessings, love, Ronni
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi Diana,
Entire presentation shudders and aches from first view of pic
down to the very last word! Rejection or broken love's remains
always leaves such silent yet ever eerie pieces and jilted promises.
So much emotion in disintegrating pieces of cruel abandonment.
Awesome music video song deepens sense of pain. So much
trauma in those few eerie words.
Thanks for sharing dear.
Blessings, love, Ronni
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much! This is one of the first ones where I found the picture and then write what I saw! The picture was too awesome to pass up! xoxo
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--the dramatic artwork you selected and your embedding your poem into it really established the mood for this 3-Line Poem about lost love! Best wishes in the competition- Joan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Wow--the dramatic artwork you selected and your embedding your poem into it really established the mood for this 3-Line Poem about lost love! Best wishes in the competition- Joan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Joan! It?s one of the only ones where I found the picture and the poem wrote itself after that! Appreciate your supportive words and shiny stars!! xoxo
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Lucky you--I usually browse the galleries of FanArt for ten pages before I find an appropriate artwork. Smiles- Joan
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I use Pinterest and just google phrases. Try those and see what you find! With google, after you search then hit images in the bar across the top and only images will come up. xoxo
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Thanks for the tips. I like to support our sister site and there are many talented artists on it. Smiles- Joan
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I have one I got from there that I?m saving for a horror club challenge Event I plan to do towards the summer. I?m trying to keep the monthly themes related to each month. Like this month I created the Bloody Balentine event and March will be along the lines of a demonic type Leprechaun! Haha! I?ll check out the site more often then so I can also support their work!
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I'm impressed with how organized you are--I don't know what I'll write about tomorrow! Cheers- Joan
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, Diana. Wow! I really love this piece you've penned. You say so much with so few syllables. The entire presentation is gorgeous. Fantastic photo and video as well. This sounds like a winner to me. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hello there, Diana. Wow! I really love this piece you've penned. You say so much with so few syllables. The entire presentation is gorgeous. Fantastic photo and video as well. This sounds like a winner to me. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Kerry! I found the picture and the poem wrote itself after that! Appreciate you took time to read and leave your shiny stars in support of it!! xoxo
Comment from Lu Saluna
Hi Diana,
Such a very sad poem. That feeling of having your heart burst when the person you love walks out of your life is an unforgettable experience.
It is a great three line poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi Diana,
Such a very sad poem. That feeling of having your heart burst when the person you love walks out of your life is an unforgettable experience.
It is a great three line poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! The pic came first and the words fell out of my pen all by themselves! :). Thanks for appreciating! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Walking away from a shattered heartbreak is like walking away from a shattered vase. It's the best thing that could happen. God will always patch the pieces back together if the fragile pieces are scattered all over the place.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Walking away from a shattered heartbreak is like walking away from a shattered vase. It's the best thing that could happen. God will always patch the pieces back together if the fragile pieces are scattered all over the place.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Amen! If it isn?t right, it isn?t right and God will most definitely put every single little shattered piece back together! Appreciate your feedback! xoxo
