Comment from Martie Zuckerman

Excellent

Wonderful visuals (the words, not the photo). I really enjoyed this. The line dancing; the skirts; just fabulous. Great job! Best of luck with the voting.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review Martie. It was a fun write, cheers.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

You did a good job with the syllable count. The 5/7/5 poem reads like a haiku. Your poem flows well and places a concrete picture in the reader's mind...well done!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Hey you, welcome back. I have gorgeous, big scarlet poppies in my garden (not now haha) Thanks for the reply, cheers.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a lovely personification of a field poppies with their bright, floppy petals! ;) A wonderful offering for the contest! Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020

Thanks for the encouraging review. I do have beautiful big red poppies in my garden. Cheers.