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Unexpected Delivery

Surprise, surprise.

2 total reviews 
Comment from BethShelby
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Well, this is an unexpected delivery. I'm not sure if Karen was pregnant or if she was stealing watermelons. As far as flash fiction you stuck with the word count and it is free of errors, and it certainly has a twist at the end.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

Comment from May 1
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Haha, well that's quite an interesting story with an unexpected ending. It caught me by surprise and I love that. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this story.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    It caught that petrol station attendant by surprise too! Thanks for your review.