Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Portia, This is just a lovely I Am poem, it says a lot about you just in the repeater line alone. It says that you've put your faith in God to make you who you are today. Well written :)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Marjon van Bruggen

Excellent

Your poem speaks of a profound commitment to God, and full acceptance to be who you are meant to be. I appreciate that and admire it.

As a poem, it feels a bit forced, looking for rhyming words and mixing up the flow and rhythm. But the intent is so sincere and forceful, that I think it is worth the five stars.
Good luck Pharp!

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 20-Feb-2020

:)

Comment from LAFraser

Excellent

This is beautiful work! I don't see anything that needs improvement. My favorite line, "I worry about nothing, knowing God's in control". I enjoyed reading. Thank you for posting.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

reply by LAFraser on 18-Feb-2020

Blessings to you, Portia. You're welcome!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That is the best security of knowing who you are - that you are a child of God. Enjoyed reading this about you and when you share your poetry here - it is being "read abroad" now! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Helen,

Thanks for giving this a read.

Lots of love...Portia

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

You really know and see yourself as God see you. I only know a few with this incredible gift of purpose in God.
Sending you my best today as always and blessings for the contest,
Sally xoxo

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Sally.

Thanks for stopping by and giving this a read. Have a wonderful day.

Lots of love

Comment from MamaBebop

Exceptional

Portia,
This I AM poem is marvelous. I loved finding out more about you and how you see the world and how you think the world sees you.
You are such a beautiful person and this poem is just a small reflection of the beauty that is you.

Next time you go on a secret mission-I will go with you!! LOL...
The very best to you in the contest my friend.
Blessings,
Beth

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Beth,

You have really made my day. Thanks so much for the six star rating and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. I will make sure you go on that secret mission with me the next time I go. (smiles)

Lots of love my dear friend...Portia

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wonderful offering for this unique contest, Portia, and a beautiful presentation! ;) Thanx for sharing a piece of your heart with us and best of luck at the polls! ;)


when sharing this story --> when sharing His story [suggestion only, not correction... :) :)]

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Yvette,

Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are always appreciated.

Blessings...Portia

Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy

Excellent

This is a great I am poem.
It is a profound knowledge that you know who you are and where you came from.
You wrote well, and your thoughts were expressed well.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020

Thanks so much my friend for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.

Blessings...Portia