Comment from seewhatimwritingnow

Excellent

LOL-Aren't ALL writers somewhat 'talented' in lying? Or maybe I should say 'creative believable situations'? Of course if we write it as 'truth'- that it should be. Enjoyed this, causing me to wonder what the other chapters reveal- and I will have to explore them! Thanks so much for sharing this 'thought-provoking' piece. Betty

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for fantastic professional review

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

I can relate to this poem only too well at the moment they say the truth hurts but in my experience lies hurt worse thank you for sharing and good luck with the book

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for the review

Comment from Jerry Rauhuff

Excellent

Spells trues with beginning lines. Truth can be so hard to find when one knows not where to look. Flows well and rhyming pattern within each line. I like it and say well done.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2013

thanks for the review

Comment from cutie

Excellent

really your poem has lots of meanings that can't be reachable quickly and easily
all are professional and logicfull and fastidious works
thanks

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2006

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2006

THANK YOU FOR THIS REVIEW.

Comment from marion

Excellent

Hi AW
Awesomely clever.
I really enjoyed these too few lines!
Could of had more but that's not the form...
Loved it.
marion

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2006

Comment from novphin

Excellent

I really liked this one. It's absolute and speaks well of the truths of the world. I may not be able to name what is hidden in the style, but I can see the imagery and validity of the poem. Very nice job.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2006

Comment from Doreen Dulally

Good

I still can't grasp these tanka and that's the truth

how can lien's be a pleasure ..it's just another form of deceiving

And I'll never be afraid of the truth.. see over 100 people have viewed this

I'm either as thick as to planks ..or a sandwich short of a picnic

But go for it it works for you

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2006

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Telling lies is something that I find incredibly difficult to do AW. In this tanka you appear to be saying that you find pleasure in lying lol. An interesting piece.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2006

Comment from TheRunner

Excellent

I guess you mean truths are wonderful thingg so dont run and hide with lies, or you hide and jotfully tell lies, somthing like that, confusingly interesting.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2006

Comment from Ponder

Excellent

Hi Alcreator Writer,

I think the hidden thing is that the poem is also acrostic. (TRUES)

An interesting poem, finding joy in untruths! what a strange concept. Well put together and obviously well thought out.

Ponder

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2006