Oh Life!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Truths!"Experiences of living
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Comment from donaldww
Hi Dear,
Everyone speaks truth but me and thee, and even thee I wonder about.
And furthermore, God knows you suppress the truth and is proposing a new rule ride. You must fear the Lord when you upright you bark.
Et voila! It's a joy to no longer have to hide.
Cheers,
DW
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Hi Dear,
Everyone speaks truth but me and thee, and even thee I wonder about.
And furthermore, God knows you suppress the truth and is proposing a new rule ride. You must fear the Lord when you upright you bark.
Et voila! It's a joy to no longer have to hide.
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from visionary1234
interesting point of view, Al, as you seem to be coming from the position of liar, rather than lied to. Other than that, it's one of your more straight-forward pieces.
:)S
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interesting point of view, Al, as you seem to be coming from the position of liar, rather than lied to. Other than that, it's one of your more straight-forward pieces.
:)S
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
How true that so many lie and hide their true selves. You have said so much is so few wordsOne of my writing themes is authenticity--being who we really are, not who we want people to think we are. This one really hits home with me. Awesome~Debbie
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How true that so many lie and hide their true selves. You have said so much is so few wordsOne of my writing themes is authenticity--being who we really are, not who we want people to think we are. This one really hits home with me. Awesome~Debbie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
There is nothing you can't do if you just tell the truth. Whether the truth is painful or not, it is always the right way to go. Your few words always get the reader thinking. xsx Sandra
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There is nothing you can't do if you just tell the truth. Whether the truth is painful or not, it is always the right way to go. Your few words always get the reader thinking. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Norbanus
A truth is something we can share
or let it drift out on the air
but mostly it is carved to shape
to furnish us a goat to scape
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A truth is something we can share
or let it drift out on the air
but mostly it is carved to shape
to furnish us a goat to scape
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from ravenblack
catch the hide in the style? maybe Hyde. the excessive use of exclamation points fragments the piece to the point of no flow. what a joy hide?- I understand what you are saying, but again you need to focus on your use of language.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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catch the hide in the style? maybe Hyde. the excessive use of exclamation points fragments the piece to the point of no flow. what a joy hide?- I understand what you are saying, but again you need to focus on your use of language.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2013
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Comment from JM daSilva
I guess you are showing here that you can't accept yourself for what you are, so you have to embellish it, making it bigger than life. Is that it? I mean the character in the poem, not exactly you.
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I guess you are showing here that you can't accept yourself for what you are, so you have to embellish it, making it bigger than life. Is that it? I mean the character in the poem, not exactly you.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from mesp1986
This is a very good poem. It reminds me of the quote, "Always speak the truth, even if you voice shakes." What a powerful piece!
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This is a very good poem. It reminds me of the quote, "Always speak the truth, even if you voice shakes." What a powerful piece!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Crystal Carey
I searched I don't see the hide. I love the art work you used with this poetry. I also enjoyed your message with in, there are so many liars out there. Some even lie to themselves!!
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I searched I don't see the hide. I love the art work you used with this poetry. I also enjoyed your message with in, there are so many liars out there. Some even lie to themselves!!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to you Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your thoughts about telling the truth here is my reply
One should be Proud if they make sure they speak the truth, then (they don't have to hide there thoughts)
otherwise,
if they tell lies they shoudl not have any pride.
Gert
Gert
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Hello to you Alcreator Litt Dear
I read your thoughts about telling the truth here is my reply
One should be Proud if they make sure they speak the truth, then (they don't have to hide there thoughts)
otherwise,
if they tell lies they shoudl not have any pride.
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
