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Og and Ugg ~ Big Love

Epic developments.

36 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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More little cave-dwellers!! :) ;) Hopefully, Og will learn to bite his tongue a bit more now... :) :) A wonderful little offering on the continued lives of Ugg and Og, my lady -- thanx for sharing! ;) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    I'm so pleased you enjoyed my latest chapter of Og and Ugg. Your kind reviews always mean so much. :) :)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an extremely sweet tale of miscomprehension between males and females - things never change. The only thing I don't like about it is how the couple seem to be left unsupported by the clan, and apart from Og' s visit to the Elder are left pretty much to fend for themselves.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments. It is always so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
Comment from MamaBebop
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Sally,
What a splendid story for Valentine's day. A story of family love and life. So well written. just beautiful.
Thanks for this sparkle.
Blessings,
Beth

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
    Please forgive me I am so far behind because I am trying to publish my book. I'm so pleased you love Og and Ugg. I have so much fun with these two. They keep me grounded.
    Sending you my best today as always with big love and thanks!!
    Sally xoxo
Comment from WalkerMan
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"Epic developments" indeed in the now joined lives of Og and Ugg -- Ugg's uncomfortable pregnancy and the birth of fraternal twins, a girl and a boy (in that order). Ugg's discomfort briefly made her over-sensitive; but, as the elder explains to Og, she still loves him (which she later confirms after the twins are born). Just as he had done to win her love, Og works to bring her gifts, though they are forgotten in the excitement of the births. In the process, Og learns what I did -- love expands with the arrival of each new person to love. For me, it was my sister, whom I considered my fifth birthday present (just a few days later, and the best present I ever received), next my wife, and then each of my children.

My favorite part:

With a son and daughter side by side, Og held them as Ugg fell asleep with a smile upon her face.

As he admired his children, Og was certain his love was much bigger than he had ever dreamed.


What a splendid story for Valentine's Day. Superb, and well accompanied by the beautiful scenery in the well-chosen video.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the marvelous review and star shower, dear Mike. I'm so pleased you liked this back in the day love story. Family love is where it's at. I dearly appreciate your kimd compliments, too.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally :))
reply by WalkerMan on 15-Feb-2020
    You are most welcome, Sal. It is always a joy to read your love stories. -- Mike
Comment from country ranch writer
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A really nice presentation for this. Women who become pregnant and become emotional as the gain weight. Some men are self centered they want all the attention till the baby comes and they get shocked they are no longer number on because baby comes first above all.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
    I'm glad you enjoyed my love story from back in the day. I love this continuing story because it keeps me grounded in simplicity. Love should be simple, shouldn't it? It's the simple things that fill our lives with such joy. Sending my best today as always, Sally XO!
reply by country ranch writer on 25-Feb-2020
    Smiles
Comment from Johnny-artist
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Thank you Sally Law; totally incredible~ totally incredible. What love to pour out from a woman of high regard, as a firm reminder.
The cave ladies and gents had a way~ to offer some romantic discourses. They were as sensitive and understanding to a charm.
They had their companionships of deep well's beauty~ of wonders to behold.
The 2 lovers were so much adored. Sally, what an imaginative and realistic approach~ what an harmonious story.
I really appreciated your skill to project the wonderful.
What amazing achievements of rankings. Good for you.
all with the best
white

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
    Dear Whitetower, thank you for the wonderful review and all your kind compliments. It means so much to me. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this aged story of love. My love stories are my crowd pleasers. I will be compiling them all in a book as soon as I finish my crime novella which is in the final stages. My husband said before the end of the month I'll be published with my first novella, 'What The Blind Girl Saw.' I'm doing the final proofing this week.

    Again, thank you so much for you kind words and for reading me. :)
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Bill Pinder
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Sal, I love this new story about your cave couple. You have some great lines that are humorous and tie in well with your Characters from the Ice Age. Bill

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    First, I want to apologize for being so far behind in my reviews. I have just finished publishing my book and received it in the mail yesterday. I finally feel like I have some time on my hands! Whew! Thank you for your patience and your very kind review of my work. I'm so glad you enjoyed this love story from way back when. Sending you my best today as always, dear Bill. Sal xo
reply by Bill Pinder on 27-Feb-2020
    That's great! How did you publish?
    Bill
Comment from royowen
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Just loved this Sally, you've nailed the poor befuddled young male in Og, and even when one is an old male, they still don't understand, poor us. But beautifully and sensitively written, and we males do feel like that, I can remember gazing with wonder at my elder daughter in her crib, so beautiful, so perfect, love overflowing, well done Sally, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    I am pained to see how far behind I am in my reviews. However, I just became published this week and received my book in the mail at last. I hope you will forgive my tardiness, as I feel like I've turned the corner. Thank you so much again for your kind review. Sally xo
reply by royowen on 27-Feb-2020
    Bless you and congratulations Sally
Comment from damommy
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What a beautiful love story. Og has had to learn about pregnant women as those that came after him have had to. I admire his patience and his love for her. They will have a happy life, the four of them, and maybe more.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    Thank you again for the wonderful review of my Stone Age couple. I have fun with this and enjoy them so much. I look forward to adding more to their story in the days ahead. Please forgive me for being so late with this review as I have just published my book "What The Blind Girl Saw." I received it in the mail this week, and I finally know that sense of deep satisfaction and accomplishment. It has been a long process but a great one.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
reply by damommy on 27-Feb-2020
    Congratulations!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sal. This is very entertaining. I enjoyed the dialogue between Ugg and Og. They certainly are a modern-day couple from way back when. Childbirth has changed a little bit since then. You need to write more funny stuff.

Your pal Z.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    To say that I am behind is an understatement. Thank you for your patience and your constant friendship. I appreciate this wonderful review of Og and Ugg Big Love. :)

    I have just received my published novella in the mail yesterday. I think I can finally rest my mind now and get onto some of my things that I've been letting slide--like my reviews. It's not that I don't appreciate you, but it's been all hands on deck trying to get this book published. Self-publishing was very enlightening and way more than I thought it would be. I had to change editors, make repairs and resubmit the book. It's all good and now I feel that wonderful sense of accomplishment and a job well done. You are a real pal and thanks again!
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xo
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 27-Feb-2020
    I have an old saying about being behind. " The faster I go, the behinder I get." Keep after your published writing. I'm going to have a fable and a couple of spiritual poems published in a chapbook this summer and I'm planning to put a bunch of my fables into a book that I want to publish the end of this year or early next year. When I work on the book, that will be my priority.

    Z