Eternity's Embrace
Accept it, my child, and spread your wings...67 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have used your fifteen syllables effectively to create a thought-provoking poetic statement. Forgiveness--especially from God--should
not be taken as a be-all-and-end-all experience, but as an encouragement to become better.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You have used your fifteen syllables effectively to create a thought-provoking poetic statement. Forgiveness--especially from God--should
not be taken as a be-all-and-end-all experience, but as an encouragement to become better.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You are so right, Janice! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is such a nice message, Yvette. To forgive can be hard but when done, the freedom it gives is amazing. I love that picture, isn't it gorgeous? Well done, my friend, this is an excellent contest entry. Good luck! Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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That is such a nice message, Yvette. To forgive can be hard but when done, the freedom it gives is amazing. I love that picture, isn't it gorgeous? Well done, my friend, this is an excellent contest entry. Good luck! Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You are so right, Sandra! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Gail Denham
Right - to be forgiven does give us wings - to fly - to continue on in creative ways. Good poem. And we're not to sit still in the freedom of forgiveness - just be grateful I think.
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Right - to be forgiven does give us wings - to fly - to continue on in creative ways. Good poem. And we're not to sit still in the freedom of forgiveness - just be grateful I think.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You are so right, Gail! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Ben1
It's a good short poem. It got what it needed to say said. I liked your wings metaphor that problem meant so much more to it. It kind of reminded me of what a lady said about her wheel chair and how it was not a restraint it was what helped her move around. Same with your poem say that your able to do stuff with one's forgiveness than just cower behind it. Good luck with the contest.
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It's a good short poem. It got what it needed to say said. I liked your wings metaphor that problem meant so much more to it. It kind of reminded me of what a lady said about her wheel chair and how it was not a restraint it was what helped her move around. Same with your poem say that your able to do stuff with one's forgiveness than just cower behind it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Ben, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
Very nice LLOTS! Rise! Like a Phoenix from the ashes! Fly! Be free!!! ;) This is a fun one, Yvette, I like that image too. I hope it's warm down there and the kiddies aren't giving you too much crap! Have a good week, Lady S-
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Very nice LLOTS! Rise! Like a Phoenix from the ashes! Fly! Be free!!! ;) This is a fun one, Yvette, I like that image too. I hope it's warm down there and the kiddies aren't giving you too much crap! Have a good week, Lady S-
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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No... it's rainy and in the fifties -- gonna have a high today round 58, high tomorrow around 48 and a high on Thursday of thirty-something.... AND it's gonna rain the whole time!! YUCK!! We'll see about the kids tomorrow.... ugh! ;) Thanx for your review on this one, BLOTN -- always love your support, my friend!! ;) Take care and try to find some sunshine up there and enjoy it for me! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Yvette, you nailed it again with this perfectly written poem penned in only 15 syllables to express a powerful thought. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
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Yvette, you nailed it again with this perfectly written poem penned in only 15 syllables to express a powerful thought. Thanks for sharing your creativity and good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, Bill, for such a touching review and those wonderful stars!! :) :) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday, my friend!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
I absolutely love this. You chose the perfect picture to pair with this piece. So much was conveyed in so few words. Thank you so much for sharing.
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I absolutely love this. You chose the perfect picture to pair with this piece. So much was conveyed in so few words. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Hey there!! So good to see your beautiful smile this morning, Sandra - thanx for stopping in!! :) :) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday and, again, good to see you again!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
A truly thoughtful entry for this contest, suggestive of gaining strength instead of shying from an unfortunate encounter. Excellent choice of image as well. Good luck... ...ec
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A truly thoughtful entry for this contest, suggestive of gaining strength instead of shying from an unfortunate encounter. Excellent choice of image as well. Good luck... ...ec
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thank you, THANK YOU, EC, for your review and those wonderful stars... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
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your words are so true... ...ec
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Well said. The Art and your splendid words meld together to spark our minds and stir our hearts. When repentance is present some need forgiveness to propel them forward.
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Well said. The Art and your splendid words meld together to spark our minds and stir our hearts. When repentance is present some need forgiveness to propel them forward.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Rafy, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The arms of forgiveness
offer not shelter
but strength to fly!
Absolutley right and what a well thought of wording for the contest. Forgiveness lifts the weight of guilt and allows healing
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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The arms of forgiveness
offer not shelter
but strength to fly!
Absolutley right and what a well thought of wording for the contest. Forgiveness lifts the weight of guilt and allows healing
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Barb, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
