Follow Me
Take a risk...22 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"Follow Me"
Who wouldn't?
The words and the picture combine to make an exciting time for every one.
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
"Follow Me"
Who wouldn't?
The words and the picture combine to make an exciting time for every one.
...
This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Blahaha! You are too funny!
Love your feedback! xoxo
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Sweet reply to my Reply!
Ricky
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:) :) xoxo
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Diana, a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for another one of your romantic and sensual poems. Romance poetry is definitely your wheel house. Good job and have a great day!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
Hello Diana, a terrific Tuesday to you. Thank you for another one of your romantic and sensual poems. Romance poetry is definitely your wheel house. Good job and have a great day!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Yep, I love writing the romantic fantasy! Just seems like my muse has a storehouse of the ideas for me LOL!! No, seriously, I appreciate you enjoy them! xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
Life offers many opportunities- along with some risks. Unless we are willing to take that first step out of our comfort zone, we can lose out on the rewards. Live life with a sense of adventure instead of regret. You never know what's on the other side of the moon...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
Life offers many opportunities- along with some risks. Unless we are willing to take that first step out of our comfort zone, we can lose out on the rewards. Live life with a sense of adventure instead of regret. You never know what's on the other side of the moon...
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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I wish I was swimming in that water about right now! Oh how I miss summer when its winter! haha! appreciate you liked this! xoxo
Comment from LisaMay
Shed your fears, shed your clothes, but watch it! His heart might be safe with you but you both might get bitten by a shark. Hopefully, the shark will wait until after you show love's delight to the guy and he can die happy.
All mocking aside, this is a youthful, sexy poem about a situation we can fantasize ourselves into.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
Shed your fears, shed your clothes, but watch it! His heart might be safe with you but you both might get bitten by a shark. Hopefully, the shark will wait until after you show love's delight to the guy and he can die happy.
All mocking aside, this is a youthful, sexy poem about a situation we can fantasize ourselves into.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Ha! that's what i was thinking too! maybe in a nice huge lake like I live near, but I don't know about being in the ocean at night either! oh isn't fantasy a wonderful thing! no sharks! thanks for appreciating this! xoxo
Comment from Patty Palmer
The idea of throwing off all your troubles and do your own thing sounds wonderful! Too bad that after the little break, the troubles are all still there as you left it!!
I do like the poem well.
Good job!
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
The idea of throwing off all your troubles and do your own thing sounds wonderful! Too bad that after the little break, the troubles are all still there as you left it!!
I do like the poem well.
Good job!
Patty
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanks Patty! Fantasy is a wonderful place to visit, but reality is absolutely where we all live! thanks for enjoying this and the shiny stars! xoxo
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is a very romantic poem. You also have done the presentation beautifully. "come with me to meet the moon", this is a very enticing line. It adds just enough spice to your poem. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
This is a very romantic poem. You also have done the presentation beautifully. "come with me to meet the moon", this is a very enticing line. It adds just enough spice to your poem. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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:) thanks Lu! Fantasy is an awesome area to explore as a poet. My favorite especially romance fantasy! appreciate you enjoyed and leaving your precious shiny stars! xoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
The moon this past week has been a scene of astounding beauty. I am thinking with Valentine's Day coming up, your poem resonates with love and the moon as motivated. Last night the beauty in the heavens was spectacular. Have an awesome week, Diana.
Drew xx
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
The moon this past week has been a scene of astounding beauty. I am thinking with Valentine's Day coming up, your poem resonates with love and the moon as motivated. Last night the beauty in the heavens was spectacular. Have an awesome week, Diana.
Drew xx
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Yes, beautiful moon! Perfect for the month of love! Thank you so much and enjoy your week too!
Comment from Barbaraj1
This was a delightful and sexy poem. The way I look these days it would have to be pitch black for someone to follow me! Thanks for sharing this poem.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
This was a delightful and sexy poem. The way I look these days it would have to be pitch black for someone to follow me! Thanks for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Haha! I?m with you on that one! Oh the joy of fantasy! Thanks for enjoying!! xoxo
Comment from papa55mike
Wow! What a wonderfully written sexy poem and that picture is on fire. Taking those risks when younger, maybe, but not now. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
Wow! What a wonderfully written sexy poem and that picture is on fire. Taking those risks when younger, maybe, but not now. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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haha! Yeah, i know what you mean! I'd probably drown these days! thanks for enjoying! xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, well, don't think it would take much of 'convincing' to get any man to follow that thong bathing suit there...LOL!! ;) :) A beautiful offering of invitation in complete metaphor -- love it!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
Yeah, well, don't think it would take much of 'convincing' to get any man to follow that thong bathing suit there...LOL!! ;) :) A beautiful offering of invitation in complete metaphor -- love it!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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hahah!! yeh, well, I ain't wearing that suit, that's for sure! ahah! I love writing fantasy poems! :) tee hee! xoxo