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Simple People

A Short Rant

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Comment from JudyE
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I'm under-accomplished too but that doesn't mean we can't write so write on, Rikki. All trades and professions are needed if a society is to function well.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
    Some politicians here in the US call us underachievers deplorable because we do not think or vote the way they do.
    RikkiLXVI
Comment from BeasPeas
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An interesting observation, Rikki. Just look--we've all ended up in the same place, so we're all equal here. And--I thought I was the only one who reads the profiles of those whose work is posted. Marilyn

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    Writers are writers no matter the background we all have a story to tell. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
    Rikki
Comment from papa55mike
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I feel where you're coming from. I am a retired janitor from a local elementary school. I used to clean up poop and vomit off of the floor. But all of these teachers and professors have helped me to become a better writer. I thank them every chance I get. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    The teachers and professors are a great help. The rocket scientist is a special help.
    RikkiLXVI
Comment from Gideon300
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You're not alone but I guess it just goes to show how many people across a spectrum needs to pour out themselves through writing. I still struggle with "spags" But I have to think that like anything it's a craft and if you keep at it, nobody can keep you from greatness. If I remember correctly I think da Vinci was snubbed and couldn't attend the elite school of his peers because of his birth status, so he made nature his school. Well nobody today denies his genius. Chin up, everyone may write but it doesn't necessarily make what they write good. - Brenda

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
    SPAGS are a problem for all writers, that is why god invented editors.
    RikkiLXVI
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad you're here, Rikki! You have lots of experience that those who have advanced degrees don't have. You bring your unique perspective on life and that's important to get your feedback!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    The simpler the puzzle the easier it is to put together.
    Rikki
Comment from Dancemom
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This is a well-written blurb. No, you are not under accomplished. I was an accountant for only two years and became a stay at home mom fifteen years ago. I personally find working in a oilfield quite accomplished. I couldn't ever do that job. It would be hard work, and I am weak. You are also a good writer. Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    That you could be an accountant for two years beats the heck out of me, I let the wife do the checkbook. The hardest part about the oilfield was being away from home.
    Rikki
reply by Dancemom on 09-Feb-2020
    I guess different jobs are more difficult or easier depending on our gifts.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Math is not my gift.
    Rikki
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I'm with you. No degree, no pedigree, just a southern woman who is haunted and entertained by voices of imaginary friends. Great blurb and nice to meet you. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Great to meet you Gretchen Just a gentleman from Louisiana, thank you for reading and reviewing.
    RikkiLXVI
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Love the blurb... although, I'm gonna take issue with the 'simple people' part: I don't for a moment think that an oilfield worker is simple! They work their asses off to bring that paycheck home!! ;) Tell you what, MOST of the doctors, lawyers, and even the rocket scientist couldn't hope to keep up with a day that you used to work... so 'under-accomplished' is a really BAD word. It's all relative: yours was more physical, but we couldn't hope to do our job without the oil that you brought in: gas, electronic ceramics, plastics, rocket/airplane/vehicle... all oil products! :) :) 'Thiers' was more mental, and they kept you healthy/out of jail or happily divorced (not that you needed it - lol - just an example!!)/provided for advancements in the defense of the country...
And here endeth the soapbox for the evening.... suffice to say, however, that together we are a whole. Period. No such thing as this 'under-accomplished' bullshite... ;) :) So, offer to buy me a beer and we'll move on... LOL! LOL! I'll have an Abita Mardi Gras Bock (they are in season now, right?!) and an oyster po-boy, please....

And that, my friend, is my little blurb! ;) :) Yvette

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    I am glad my little blurb inspire you to shout back at me. That way we can have a dialogue. My first title was Ordinary People, but that has done been used for a movie. I know there are not many people that could do the oil field work, because I saw so many come and go during my 25 years. It takes a lot to work 12+ hours a day 7 days a week for up to a month at a time. We had to be simple or just a little crazy. You are working on a bomb that can go off with the least mistake. The Deepwater Horizon just one example.
    I do not down play any other profession, I am sure there are simple and crazy people there too.
    Rikki
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Rikki!
I enjoyed reading your "little blurb."
I've not read most of the writers' profiles on FanStory although I imagine many are fascinating.
I am a former high school and college English and sociology teacher.
Published one book.
Have an amazing family.
Love to write.
Each day is a gift.
That's it.

P.S.
Keep writing!

diane

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    I will and thank you for the read and your kind review.
    RikkiLXVI
reply by Mrs. KT on 09-Feb-2020
    Just "sing your song," Rikki.

    Just sing your song...

    diane
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Thank you Diane I sing when I write, but you do not want to hear.
    Rikki
Comment from Bill Pinder
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I appreciate your little blurb.I am also one of the little people so don't worry about it. Join the club and keep on writing. Yes there is even a very creative rocket scientist. Bill

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the read and the review, I just felt the need to write something short.
    RikkiLXVI