V-Day Ditty
Double entendre divided by half-wit93 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
How very clever and humorous, I love the last two lines as you let the reader figure out what .... means, I never guessed it would be (heart), very well written with wonderful artwork****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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How very clever and humorous, I love the last two lines as you let the reader figure out what .... means, I never guessed it would be (heart), very well written with wonderful artwork****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! What a saucy little poem, and the perfect ending! What does a girl want from her man, it has to be a big heart!! I loved it, well done! This should have gone into the Valentine contest. It gave me quite a giggle. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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LOL! What a saucy little poem, and the perfect ending! What does a girl want from her man, it has to be a big heart!! I loved it, well done! This should have gone into the Valentine contest. It gave me quite a giggle. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Sandra! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
What can I say about your poem 'You told it plain and as boldly as you could.
It's not that we haven't heard those words before it is just different when you see it in print.
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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What can I say about your poem 'You told it plain and as boldly as you could.
It's not that we haven't heard those words before it is just different when you see it in print.
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Cookie! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
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your very welcome.
Cookie
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your very welcome.
Cookie
Comment from Minglement
Not my usual read, but I have to say you did a good job with double entendre and veiled (and not so veiled) expressions of passion and satisfaction. No suggestions for improvement. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Not my usual read, but I have to say you did a good job with double entendre and veiled (and not so veiled) expressions of passion and satisfaction. No suggestions for improvement. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ (I never entered the contest--I think it required a "real" poem of fixed lines and syllables.)
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Ah, I think you're write. Sometimes we start out with a entry and our muse has other ideas lol.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi what ever the meaning that is hidden in this write, I enjoy reading it and it pleases me to decipher the meaning inside.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi what ever the meaning that is hidden in this write, I enjoy reading it and it pleases me to decipher the meaning inside.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Benny! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from dragonpoet
Well I can see why to didn't use the word that the poem alludes to. But it is as good or not better to have a big heart. This is a funny erotic poem.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Well I can see why to didn't use the word that the poem alludes to. But it is as good or not better to have a big heart. This is a funny erotic poem.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
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You're welcome, Liz.
Joan
Comment from Patty Palmer
I just had to give this six stars! I laughed my butt off while I was reading it! Well written!! We all have to get silly and naughty once in a while! This is your once! LOL Just kidding!
Great job!
Patty
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I just had to give this six stars! I laughed my butt off while I was reading it! Well written!! We all have to get silly and naughty once in a while! This is your once! LOL Just kidding!
Great job!
Patty
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Patty! Bonus star much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend,
Ha....ha....ha... this poem cracked me up. I thought of penis all the way until the end... a heart, hah. Well done.... very funny.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend,
Ha....ha....ha... this poem cracked me up. I thought of penis all the way until the end... a heart, hah. Well done.... very funny.
Gypsy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gypsy! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! This is a fun little Valentine ditty that makes of smile or laugh out loud. The play on words and the double entendre were fun to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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LOL! This is a fun little Valentine ditty that makes of smile or laugh out loud. The play on words and the double entendre were fun to read.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Janet! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from MamaBebop
Elizabeth,
I was so very amused by this!! This is really creatively written. I HEARTED it! Every woman wants a man with a big one! Heart that is-the size of his heart does matter! LOL...
Blessing to you,
Beth
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Elizabeth,
I was so very amused by this!! This is really creatively written. I HEARTED it! Every woman wants a man with a big one! Heart that is-the size of his heart does matter! LOL...
Blessing to you,
Beth
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Beth! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
