V-Day Ditty
Double entendre divided by half-wit93 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
Haha. Lol. Lmao. Rotf. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear Elizabeth! I love the witty and sarcastic humor! I wish I had six stars left.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Haha. Lol. Lmao. Rotf. This is an entertaining piece of poetry dear Elizabeth! I love the witty and sarcastic humor! I wish I had six stars left.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Rebekka! I appreciate the woulda-been-bonus. Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Ogden
You are quite the iconoclast, Elizabeth.
I'm wondering if you have a mind to use your sense of humor in other ways, or if this is your stock in trade.
Ogden
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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You are quite the iconoclast, Elizabeth.
I'm wondering if you have a mind to use your sense of humor in other ways, or if this is your stock in trade.
Ogden
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Ogden! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Re my twisted humor--I especially love crafting Limericks. I hope I can find my "collected works"--it would be fun to post them! Cheers. LIZ
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I'm a limerick enthusiast, too, Liz.
I can imagine what yours are like! Do post them.
Ogden
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Hello Ogden! You got me on the hunt for my wicked words of yore--I wrote at least two dozen. Meantime, thanks to your prompt, I did my best to recall a couple, which I shall share with you here:
To make up for his stinting on height, God
Graced little John with a ripe rod
So huge was his dong
All three legs two feet long
Thus earned him the moniker "Tripod"
The flasher roamed station-to-station
Aiming to cause a sensation
Alas, not a flinch/squirm
No one noticed his inchworm
(By two-tenths, an exaggeration)
Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
This is really, really good Elizabeth and very well thought out. You've got it down just right, letting the words hang in just the right places. This made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This is really, really good Elizabeth and very well thought out. You've got it down just right, letting the words hang in just the right places. This made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Boogienights
Hahahaha..love this! You say a lot without actually saying it. Its an art to do what you're done in your hilarious poem. Thanks for the laugh and smile.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hahahaha..love this! You say a lot without actually saying it. Its an art to do what you're done in your hilarious poem. Thanks for the laugh and smile.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Gloria ....
This is written with great good fun. Size does matter and particularly when it's the size of the heart.
A good bit of misdirection and double entendre and written in fine metre and rhyme too.
Thank you for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This is written with great good fun. Size does matter and particularly when it's the size of the heart.
A good bit of misdirection and double entendre and written in fine metre and rhyme too.
Thank you for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Gloria
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Gloria! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Eve Vasa
Hi Elizabeth, this is a very telling work. I don't know what to say really. It rhymes and is fast paced, but I think it is a bit to inane to be a five star poem. But the biggest thing holding back this poem, in mho, is it is too predictable.
I have indulged this sundry musing of yours and I'm giving it a four star rating today. Thanks for sharing your writing and have a lovely day, Eve.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hi Elizabeth, this is a very telling work. I don't know what to say really. It rhymes and is fast paced, but I think it is a bit to inane to be a five star poem. But the biggest thing holding back this poem, in mho, is it is too predictable.
I have indulged this sundry musing of yours and I'm giving it a four star rating today. Thanks for sharing your writing and have a lovely day, Eve.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Eve. I agree that there are WAY too many auto-fivers here in Fanstory Land. Check out my piece on that subject titled "Next: Exceptionally Exceptional?" (subtitle: Must we be haunted by those spectral stars?) Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Dancemom
This is a well-written and funny poem. Your rhyming pattern works well with your humor. Your ending is awesome.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
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This is a well-written and funny poem. Your rhyming pattern works well with your humor. Your ending is awesome.
Great job! Thank you for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from GWHARGIS
Laughing my tail off at this. I love the mischievous lead up to the edge of the gutter. It was my choice to jump in without waiting for the ending. Great tongue in cheek vibe. I loved it and found myself both titillated and then ashamed I jumped to the wrong conclusion. Have a great weekend. Gretchen
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Laughing my tail off at this. I love the mischievous lead up to the edge of the gutter. It was my choice to jump in without waiting for the ending. Great tongue in cheek vibe. I loved it and found myself both titillated and then ashamed I jumped to the wrong conclusion. Have a great weekend. Gretchen
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Gretchen! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Please,
don't be ashamed: It's HARD not to jump to the "wrong" conclusion!
Cheers. LIZ
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"V-Day Ditty" is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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"V-Day Ditty" is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. I am awed to be referred to as a poet, ever more so a talented one. (The check's in the mail!) Cheers. LIZ
LIZ,
you're more than welcome.
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from Therese Caron
Great poem with a very wonderful twist at the end. Here we are thinking of passion and sexual encounters, and it was about his heart the whole time. Ingenious! This is a great piece of work! Fun, too!
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Great poem with a very wonderful twist at the end. Here we are thinking of passion and sexual encounters, and it was about his heart the whole time. Ingenious! This is a great piece of work! Fun, too!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thank you Therese! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
