Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

"The ladies all drool
Knowing you have the tool"
There is a sweetness cut with
a bite in this work, Elizabeth,
which makes it very human.
Lovely work.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Elizabeth Emerald
My aren't you clever with your rhyming poem to lead to believe from what you were describing is totally different.
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thank you Gert. Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Feb-2020

You are welcome
Elizabeth Emerald.
Gert

Comment from Kaneh Bosem

Excellent

Both true and sensual! I can definitely relate with the content of your piece. I really enjoyed the part where you said "...heart". Another great read!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020

Thank you Kaneh. Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

The wonderful twist at the end made me think of a song I once heard (Cutest Little Dinghy in the Navy by Ruth Wallis) in which the lyrics were very suggestive, but the song was perfectly clean. A wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this is a fun post Elizabeth, a bit naughty, but well thought out and rhymed and you made me smile, this guy must be popular! He he he, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you Dolly! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from rhymelord

Excellent

"A dirty mind is a joy forever" (Anon)
I like the strong rhythm and rhyme. This is my kind of poetry. Pity about the fail on the last line. Ah well! I suppose it's for the best. Otherwise the Morality brigade (which does exist on this site) would be on your back. Whoops! I do hope that doesn't have a sexual connotation.
Regards
Reg

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you Reg! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Barbaraj1

Excellent

What a witty ditty you have written. I giggled the whole time. It was certainly different than any other Valentine that I read. The ladies all drool knowing you have the tool. LOL

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020

Thank you Barbara! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Susan Larson

Excellent

I love this! It brings back memories of all the "dirty" songs we sang in the dorm back in the 60's. And what a throbbing image you picked to go with your poem. It's a fun read!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thank you Susan. Throbbing image--never thought of that! Credit to the artist, of course. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Elizabeth!!! I'm shocked!! (not really) I'm giggling! That's really funny... reminds me of a really old poem I knew as a kid.
Roses are green
As green as the grass
The little pink elephant
Fell on his _______

Now don't get excited
And don't turn pale
'Cuz the little pink elephant
Fell on his tail!

Childish, but adorable... but then again, I was a child too at the time! :)
You wrote such a fun poem, thanks for sharing :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thank you, Susan! We had a sing-song like that too...wish I could recall..Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Martie Zuckerman

Good

Happy Thursday. I found your ditty humorous and entertaining! Well done. The verse certainly did evoke visuals. This was quite fun. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020

Thank you, Marty! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ