Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is funny and clever. Admittedly, you got me on this one on the double entendre. You lead your reader right until the end expecting a different word that rhymes with "pick" and the warning placed on it.
Take care and regards,
Mary

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hello Elizabeth :)
This tickled my funny bone!
Excellently rhymed couplets which led my dirty mind to somewhere other than the heart.
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing the fun!
Best wishes, Debra :)

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from victor 66

Exceptional

I can't help but appreciate your sense of humor. Your suggestiveness relating to the end of your poem, is definitely a hoot. I also appreciate people who are not afraid of being a little suggestI've and at the same time, have a funny bone. For your information, I read your poem three times. Best wishes.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Hello Victor--What a delightful ssssssurprise!

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

reply by victor 66 on 12-Feb-2021

You are most welcome, Elizabeth. It was my pleasure.

Comment from Reese Turner

Excellent

I find it most depressing,
This subject you're addressing,
As I know I'd not be the blessing
You're looking for in your confessing.

Good hunting, girl.

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Brilliant--post that!

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the yellow color background. The picture gives you a lot of imagination...

The content of the poem leads to a lot of reader's imagination. That is excellent.

I like the last word: "HEART."

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This humour poem speaks ironically but subtly about the stand, state and status of heart that is meant for having full satisfaction silently; happy Valentine Day; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021

Hope you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Jessica Borras

Excellent

Alright, you got me. I literally laughed out loud at this one. The perfect Valentine's Day poem.

Also, it's got me wondering if my mind is more in the gutter than it should be.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thank you Jessica! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I found this poem very funny and hilarious. I started laughing once I read it. Very humorous poem. I think that you did an excellent job. No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thank you Raul! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

reply by Raul1 on 10-Feb-2021

You're welcome!

Comment from JLR

Excellent

Oh, the lucky fellow,
just hope that he is as fun as Abbot and Costello
and more so, that he can take you to Monticello
as he charms you with his head on your pillow.

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

Brilliant--did you make that up? If so, post it--the head on pillow punchline is priceless!

reply by JLR on 11-Feb-2021

Smiling back!

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Exceptional

Ha! Ha! There you going again. I am grinning from ear to ear! V-day lovers, please take note!The psychdalic art will surely make them throbbing, I am the hearts. Cheers!

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ

What a lovely ssssssurprise!