V-Day Ditty
Double entendre divided by half-wit93 total reviews
Comment from equestrik
Ha!! This is such a clever write for the upcoming holiday -really fun and funny. Great picture to go with your write and The end-well very catchy!! Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Ha!! This is such a clever write for the upcoming holiday -really fun and funny. Great picture to go with your write and The end-well very catchy!! Well done.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment from jenintorre
You have put a warning on this for bad language but I can't see any bad language in it. A very naughty but humorous poem, it made me smile. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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You have put a warning on this for bad language but I can't see any bad language in it. A very naughty but humorous poem, it made me smile. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you Jen! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
I put the warnings in to cover myself by warning away the prudish--and also to set up obvious expectations for the punchline.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
This definitely is a winner. You made me laugh and that is so needed during these pandemic times. Wish I had six stars!! Very clever wording and the end priceless. Write more, please.
Blessings,
brigitte
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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This definitely is a winner. You made me laugh and that is so needed during these pandemic times. Wish I had six stars!! Very clever wording and the end priceless. Write more, please.
Blessings,
brigitte
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you Brigitte! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
If you liked this, you may enjoy my parody limerick quartet on Corona "PROFILE-R PAYS FOR POST-AGE"--feel free to read for a chuckle.
Comment from E. Denison
Elizabeth - I quite like the humor in this entry. What a fun offering for one of the most celebrated and simultaneously hated holidays we have. All in good fun, this poem is great! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Elizabeth - I quite like the humor in this entry. What a fun offering for one of the most celebrated and simultaneously hated holidays we have. All in good fun, this poem is great! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
ha ha ha! This could have been written for April Fool's Day! You lead the reader to expect one thing, then turn the last line into something quite different. Very clever!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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ha ha ha! This could have been written for April Fool's Day! You lead the reader to expect one thing, then turn the last line into something quite different. Very clever!
Thank you for sharing.
Susan
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you Susan! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Begin Again
A bit of naughtiness lurking around but a great amount of humor for sure! It's very cute and clever and really fun to read. Thanks for sharing your little masterpiece. Smiles to you!
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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A bit of naughtiness lurking around but a great amount of humor for sure! It's very cute and clever and really fun to read. Thanks for sharing your little masterpiece. Smiles to you!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from estory
You have the sense of humor to pull this off; setting us up with all those sensual images and a hint of graphic ones too, only to leave us with the traditional image of the heart. Like always the wit and personality is there estory
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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You have the sense of humor to pull this off; setting us up with all those sensual images and a hint of graphic ones too, only to leave us with the traditional image of the heart. Like always the wit and personality is there estory
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from Stephen Allen Crow
What a play of words, good job Elizabeth. Truly fits for valentine's day approaching, with a touch of humor. This is a great piece, keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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What a play of words, good job Elizabeth. Truly fits for valentine's day approaching, with a touch of humor. This is a great piece, keep up the great work!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from jaydub99
Interesting and well written. I must admit you caught me as I was reading through the lines and I didn't expect the ending. I was thinking she is saucy and just throwing it out there.....and then you reel it in. Your tease at the end was my favorite line. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Interesting and well written. I must admit you caught me as I was reading through the lines and I didn't expect the ending. I was thinking she is saucy and just throwing it out there.....and then you reel it in. Your tease at the end was my favorite line. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for the giggles, Liz. I don't know why but I don't think I was notified of this post. Anyway, you did a lot just by sheer innuendo and as much as I am a dunce at this topic, I think I got what you were implying instead of "heart" but maybe not.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the giggles, Liz. I don't know why but I don't think I was notified of this post. Anyway, you did a lot just by sheer innuendo and as much as I am a dunce at this topic, I think I got what you were implying instead of "heart" but maybe not.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the hard-to-heart. Cheers. LIZ
The reason you weren't notified is that this was originally released last year; fans only get notified of new postings.
