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Won't You Be

just pretend, I think, abcb, 7-9-7-9

3 total reviews 
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Won't You Be"
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
    thxs for your review, Ricky

    lulube
reply by Ricky1024 on 21-Feb-2020
    My pleasure.
    Ricky
Comment from Gideon300
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Your poem makes me think of the delights and anticipation of love in every way. Your words make the reader wistful and longing for that special someone. I hope you have a joyous Valentine's Day.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    thxs for your great comments in this review. Nice to know the effect on a reader. and I know that chocolate goes on sale after Valentines day. lol

    lulube
Comment from K Dono
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This is super sweet, I love it. It shows that experiences are more important than gifts and show. It gives off a comforting feel. Good luck in the contest you entered!

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    I never entered it in a contest. but thanks for the luck. and thxs for your gracious comments in your review

    lulube
    nks for the luck
reply by K Dono on 09-Feb-2020
    I'm sorry, I should have read more. It seemed like a perfect Valentine's poems.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
    no no you couldn't have read the next one yet. not your fault at all

    lulube